Through the waters
That silently flow
At the back of your eyes
I sail
Like a lost ship
Anchored by
Your breaths
Trying to reach
The shore of your heart
Patiently
Enduringly
Gushing through
The amorous waves
That come my way
Holding on to
All my desires.
~ Chhaya
Great imagery!
Hope you’re well πΈ
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Thanks so much, Vanessa! Great to hear from you and I am so glad you enjoyed this piece. Yes, I have been doing just fine. Trust life’s been good your end too. π
Much love!!
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You are very welcome! Aww thank you, and I am glad to hear that!
I am okay, too, thanks!
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This is beautiful
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Thanks so much, Nandita! Glad you liked it. Lovely to hear from you. π
Love!!
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My pleasure. Hope you’re well β€οΈ
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Yes, almost! π
Hope things are all great your end. π€β€οΈ
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Lol. Things are almost fine at my end as well πβ€οΈ
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Beautiful imagery.
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Hey….Thanks a lot, Shivani! So good to hear from you. π€
Love!!
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It’s good time to time you keep on pouring your out here.β€οΈ
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Lol! I am so inconsistent that it gets really embarrassing at times to tell you frankly, D! π
Trust you’re well, dearie. π€π
Much love!
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Heart out
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Your imagery is beautifully well expressed. π
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Thanks so much, Charlie! Means a lot. Hope you’re well. ππ€
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Your welcome. π
All is well and hope your having a good day. π
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As original and wonderful as Pablo Neruda
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Aww….you just made my heart sing!! That’s a huge compliment to have. Thanks for the read and your generous words of appreciation, Purvesh. π
Your writings are beautiful and I look forward to reading more from you. π
Cheers!!
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You are welcome and thank you! Keep up the good work π
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This is such an exquisite piece of poetryπ
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Thanks so much Sameera for your kind words! Glad you enjoyed this piece. π
Much love!
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well…you swept me away
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Haha… That’s a lovely compliment to have. Thanks, Joseph! ππ€
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I LOVE the picture you chose! And your poetry is so beautiful ^ ^
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Hey, Bluebell! It’s so lovely to hear from you. Thank you very much for the read and the kind comment. Great to have your thoughts on the poem. This picture appealed to me as well. π
I must say your writings are absolutely stunning and I look forward to reading more from you. π€
Much love!
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My day is totally MADE ^ ^
Thank you so so so much!!! ^ ^
And my absolute pleasure ^ ^ β€ β€ β€
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nice work i like the metaphors.
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Thank you so much for the read and your kind comment! I have been away from the site for some time and hence could only respond to you now. π
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