Loom of Desires

I was the warmth
of your golden skin
and you were the source
of my balmy breaths
those were the nights
when I had learned
how to weave dreams
with my cottony hands

your hair my silken yarn
which I could spin
all through the night
and then wind them
around my fingers
like beams wrapped
around warp-piles

with the jacquard loom of desires
taking hues from ombre skies
I thus wove a thousand dreams
in dark nights with open eyes.

– Chhaya

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  1. Wow! You return with these impeccably and beautifully woven words that follow a tinge of nostalgic yearning for a past time. Still, reading this is like wrapping in a warm blanket. You have a great command of language and stitched the extended metaphor of the loom perfectly. I love this!!!

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    1. Oh….I am deeply touched, thanks so much, Percy ! Your generous words of appreciation are like blessings to me and I truly value that. This poem happened after a gap of more than 10 days. I haven’t been well and hence couldn’t manage to write. And when you write after a long time and receive such encouraging comments, it’s one of the most wonderful feelings to have. Thanks once again and I very much appreciate every thought that you express on my poems. 😊

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      1. You are most welcome, Chhaya. I’m just happy to see you back and I hope you are feeling better. You know I love your poetry and I always anticipate your next piece. 😊

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        1. Yes, Percy, I am feeling much better now. So kind of you to ask. 😊

          I am humbled yet again by your kind words and I just want to let you know that I admire your writings deeply and as much as you look forward to my posts, I look forward to yours. You’re a beautiful soul and I am so glad to connect with you. Thanks again. 😊

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    1. Thanks so much, Ayesha ! I am so glad you took time out to read my poem and enjoyed it. 😊

      Your writings are beautiful and I look forward to reading more of your work.

      Much love !
      Chhaya
      πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“

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    1. Akshita, you always bring along these lovely vibes with your comments. Every thought that you share on my poems is a piece of huge encouragement for me. I truly value the words of appreciation that you so generously put forth and the warmth that you share with me. So glad to connect with you. And yes, I am much better now. Thanks so much dear ! 😊

      Much love !
      πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“

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    1. Yayyy….I am so glad you liked it ! It feels great when you write something after a long time and someone appreciates your work. And if the appreciation comes from a lovely friend and a brilliant poet, it becomes all the more special. Thanks so much, D ! 😊

      More love !
      πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“

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    1. I am glad you liked my work, Jeremy. Thanks! Yes, I was away from the forum past few months. Not that I wanted to, but there are times when you just don’t have control over certain situations. Over that phase now, and it feels great to be back here and come across brilliant writers like you. 😁

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  2. Ok. No, seriously,
    You are amazing.

    Please tell me you’ve been published, and if you haven’t, girl, shoot honey, I’d buy your chapbook.
    And I’d ask you to sign it.

    You go to poetry slams and read these right??

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    1. Thank you very much for your kind words of appreciation, dear friend! This means a lot to me.😊

      Well, no….I am not a published author, nor do I go to slams. I only share my poems here. If I ever come out with a book, I will certainly send you a signed copy of it if we still keep in touch and you continue to enjoy my work. Lol!!😁

      Best wishes! πŸ€—

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    1. Thanks so much, Megha! I very humbly accept your kind words of appreciation. It’s very gratifying to see you taking out time to go through my poems and for all the lovely comments and words of encouragement that you very patiently left behind. I truly value that and admire you for your generosity. Thank you for the love that you always send my way. I am sending you some more for my side. πŸ€—
      πŸŒΈβ€οΈβ€οΈπŸ€—β€οΈβ€οΈπŸŒΈ

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  3. Thanks Chaaya for all the love. I really appreciate.Glad I found your poem,Being on the author panel of few Lit sites,am always looking for talent. I’ll definitely spread the word. Have a good day, dear.

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    1. That’s very kind of you, Megha! I would take it as an absolute privilege to be able to reach out to more readers through you. Thanks so much you beautiful soul. πŸ€—
      πŸŒΈβ€οΈπŸ€—β€οΈπŸŒΈ

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