Finding Love

You were too shallow
to bear the depth of my love
but someday I will find
the soul to hold
the enormous love
which my heart comprise

and the arms to embrace
every fraction of me
through my length and breadth
and the depths inside

the touch which feels
beyond my skin
and the eyes that gaze
beneath my guise

the one who fills
every pore of me
and engulfs my whole
in his amorous zephyr.





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    1. Lovely Jeni, you never miss a chance to bring smile on my face through your ever encouraging comments ! It’s always a delight to hear from you. Thanks so much for the read and your kind words. 😊

      Hope life’s great !

      Much love !

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        1. Hey, Santusht ! Sorry, I’ve been away from the forum for a while and have just got back. Will check out your posts soon. And please call me just Chhaya, without ma’am. 😊

          Cheers !


    1. Thanks so much Tanay for the read and the kind comment ! To fall for somebody is really easy, the real test is in staying. Perfection…I am not too sure about, but I am really glad you liked my work. 😊


    1. That’s very kind of you Charlie to say so, thanks so much ! Your kind words are great source of encouragement to me and I really appreciate the time that you spare to read and comment on my poems. Thanks again ! 😊

      Hope you’ve been well !

      Cheers !!

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    1. Hey, Brian ! Great to hear from you after long. Thanks for your kind comment. I am thrilled to know that you enjoyed it. 😊

      Hope you’ve been well ! Take care and have a great weekend. πŸ˜€

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  1. Actually
    When you have lot of love inside of you
    The only way you will ever feel complete is by spreading that love wide and far
    There is no single human who can take some of love and be still human
    You may however choose to share a huge part of it to that special someone
    Rest all is for the universe
    And finding that special someone is an equally challenging job

    Don’t find love
    Spread it
    Let love come to you
    Because there is a dearth of true and honest feeling in the world now.

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    1. Thanks so much Vinay for taking out time to read my work and for your kind comment. I am glad you could feel it so deeply. This is what poems are meant for…to be felt and absorbed. 😊

      I really liked your blog and would love to read more from you.

      My very best to you for everything !

      Cheers !! πŸ˜€

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    1. Thanks so much dear for the read and the kind comment. I am so glad you liked this piece. 😊

      You’re a blessed writer and I am really excited about reading more of your work. I don’t think you need any feedback for improvement, you’re just fantastic !

      My very best to you for everything !

      Much love !


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