Parallel to the amorphous sky
the horizontal frame
of my statuesque body
lies like a piece of
magnificent architecture
holding vertical pillars
of your transcending memories
elevating from the pedestal
of my torpid mind
embellished with the carvings
of verses of love and pain
which have lingered with me
through every fraction of time
and the moonlight beams
pierce through my skin
like armature wires
so as to shape my contours
reminding me of your touch
which would instantly convert
every fragment of me
into a living figurine
of perfectly sculpted art
as I arched in your arms.
– Chhaya
That was an exceptional piece.
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Thanks so much dear friend for the read and the kind comment ! I am so glad you enjoyed it. š
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Nice use of words. šš
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Thanks a lot, Ayesha ! Pleasure to hear from you. š
Much love !
ššš
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Your usage of words is at next level buddy
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That’s very kind of you to think so, Kinnari ! Thanks a ton ! š
Much love !
ššš
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Another beautiful poem Chhaya! Too amazedšš
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Thanks so much, Tapasi ! Always lovely to hear from you. I am glad you enjoyed this one. š
Much love !
ššš
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Your words clearly show the depth of desire, yearning vividly touching the hearts of reader. How graciously you paint yourself and depict the form of art symbolised as love!
This was a marvellous work, Chaaya and glad you are back!:)
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Pardon me for my spelling error. Chhaya!:)
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No problem….after all, “what’s in a name (spelling)” ! š
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Haha.āŗ
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Oh D, my wonderful friend…..your words are precious to me. Thanks so much for being ever encouraging and for always pushing me to do better.
My writings are mostly about love and diverse emotions attached to it. I simply attempt to put them into words on paper, visualising them in various forms. I was always apprehensive if the representations that I draw in my poems would go well with the readers, but friends like you are the ones who always made me believe that I can carry on with my style of writing. I certainly cannot thank you enough for this. š
Much love !
ššš
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Honestly, I believe you can carry all the diversity in your work so aptly that it will always make a reader gasp!.
You have a great command on the meter of the poem I feel, and that is really a weapon to a writer.āŗ
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This should make my day, week and month…even a year may be ! š
I feel honoured and deeply humbled by your words. You’re very kind, D. And a lovely soul to connect with. š
Much love !
ššš
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My pleasure to connect wity you too dear!
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Love I understand in a jiff. I wished so.
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Sorry Aquib, I couldn’t get you here. Can you elaborate plz ? Thanks. š
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Oh, sorry, my bad, I think it’s out of context here.
Btw (I forgot) , you versed it beautifully. Keep smiling.
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Thanks so much, Aquib ! Glad that you liked it. š
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, (I saw your post in my feed again) , why is that you give three hearts to girls (only) whilst you write about love and ignore male bloggers, hmmm? I mean it’s your discretion, I am thinking that you may be one of the modern days feminists? (btw it’s good if you are!!!). Sometimes do visit my blogs too, although unmatching your liking standards but still It would be encouraging… Good night.
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Haha….interesting observation, Aquib. Well, the hearts for girls are to convey sisterly love to them. I am ok sharing hearts with boys if they take it in a similar sense. šššš
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You mean brotherly love?, or just as admiration? Or just simple care wala love or ishq wala love?
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BTW that song ishq wala love is awesome.
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I found your words quite by chance, and fell instantly in love with them. Something about the way you write presses all the right buttons for me.
Thank you for bringing this into the world.
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Thank you so much for stopping by and taking time out to read my poems. I am so glad you enjoyed my work. I truly appreciate your kind words of appreciation and it’s a deeply humbling feeling.
You have got a very interesting blog indeed and I am certainly going to spare more time to read what’s up there.
Thanks again for paying a visit. š
Cheers !
Chhaya
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This is beautiful.
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Thanks so much, Sarah ! This means a lot to me. š
Much love !
ššš
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Such eloquent word usage! Such imagery! *Claps* You’re truly gifted.
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Great to hear from you Anisha and thanks so much for the read and your generous words of appreciation. I truly value that. š
I really love your writings and always look forward to your posts. You are brilliant indeed !
Thanks again for the visit. š
Much love !
ššš
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The pleasure is all mine š
Thanks! I’m blushing at your ‘brilliant’ compliment š
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Great like always! š
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Thanks so much for the read and the kind comment dear ! It’s lovely to hear from you. I am glad you enjoyed this piece. š
Much love !
ššš
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You’re an amazing player….Of words.
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Thanks so much, Riya ! That’s very kind of you to think so. I am delighted and humbled at the same time. š
Much love !
ššš
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Beautiful..
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Thanks a lot ! š
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I fall short of words after reading your poems! such is the thing it does to me. it is simply beautiful!! š
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So glad to hear from you, Manveen ! Your kind comment fills me up with deep gratitude. Thanks so much ! It feels great to know that you like my work. š
Much love !
ššš
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Oh! You’re welcome sweetš
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Excellent!
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Thanks so much ! I am glad you liked it. š
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Your choice of words are outstanding and really a great poetic felt.
Your express love in ways that I relate and get into your mind in how you feel about that person.
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That you are able to feel what I attempt to express through my poems, that you can relate to what I write, and that you enjoy my work….these are all things of immense satisfaction to me as a poet. Thanks so much Charlie for your ever encouraging words and generous appreciation ! It means so much to me. š
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You welcome. The poet must reach and touch all hearts of the world.
Many blessings to you my friend.
P.S I got a new poem up for your curious eyes to read. š
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Once again, absolutely beautiful šš
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As always when I come to see what you’ve been up to its pure magic. Keep being you and Keep smiling. x
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hey, this is a great poem with rich texture, for example, in the first three lines alone your use of assonance (with this specific sound)
“Par-A-llel to the A-mor-phOUs sky
the horiz-On-tAl frame
of my statuesque bO-dy”
there is definitely much more that could be said about just those three lines.
ps
great vocab and excellent imagery
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Wow this is a little different great use of words and fab picture love this
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Like all the other times I’ve read your mind blowing expressions, I am lost for words! :’)
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Your writing style is breathtaking!
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Good poem! The art of writing is so beautiful!
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Awesome…. š š
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Beautifully penned, I like your writing style
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Stunning. I just love your work Chhaya! Xx
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ps
enceinte vocab and fantabulous imagination
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Amazing!
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Words are really touching and soothing !!!
Please go through my latest blog at your leisure
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Beautiful use of words. The poem was wonderful..
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nice words as always, hope you remember me, seems like you have gone missing too!
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well sculpted poem too
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Love this
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That is ā¤ u just get better with every post n leave me speachless and a lil jelous (lol kidding ) its pretty
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It was the title that made me stop and say “I have to read this one”
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Haha….really? And was it worth the read?
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hahah, I found my dear that they are all wonderful gems and geodes
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That’s so very sweet of you to say. Thanks so much! š¤
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