My dreams are somber ashes
spread over opaque night
guarded by misty moon
to be preserved till the end of time
they are blown by balmy breeze
flowing slowly as you breathe
my name in a turn of gasp
when loneness gets too stark
and you want to reach to me
but there’s no way it can be
that’s when those ashes fly
hoping that they will somehow find
you dreaming of me too
just like I always do
and then we will sleep in peace
when our dreams will come to meet.
~Chhaya
Ethereal and beautiful!
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Thanks so very much… it’s wonderful to have your kind comment! I have been away from the forum since past few months, and it feels great to be back here. Hope you’ve been well all this while. 🙂
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You are most welcome and welcome back. Yes, all is well.
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Thanks!😊
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You are welcome!
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Beautiful indeed.
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Thanks so much dear friend! Lovely to hear from you. 😊
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Lovely poem. Enjoyed reading it
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Thanks so much Rajaneesh for stopping by and taking out time to read my poem. I am so glad you enjoyed it. 😊
You writings are soulful and I would love to read more from you.
Keep writing! My very best to you.
~chhaya
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Thanks Chhaya for such sweet words.
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You deserve them! 😊
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Awww.. so sweet of you.
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😊😊
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Oh my!
This is splendid Chhaya.
And welcome back.❤
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My dear D…. I am thrilled to hear from you and so glad to know that you haven’t forgotten me yet. Thanks so much! I really missed your poems and the brief interactions that we used to have. Hope you are doing great. 😊
Love and hugs!
❤️❤️❤️
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Trust me dear one, I have often jumped to your writings just to ensure I have not missed anything.
But now finally I read your words and enjoyed it too! You are sweet enough to remember me as well as our talks.
I missed it too!
Sending do much love!❤
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You’re very kind D! I hope we continue to share words and love for a long time to come. I would soon be catching up on your poetry. 😊
More love!
❤️❤️❤️
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I shall love you always Chhaya!
❤❤
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😊❤️😊
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I love this!
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Thanks so much, Srijan! I am glad you came across my blog and liked this piece. Means a lot to me.😊
You have a fantastic site and I am in awe of your writings. They are brilliant and soothing to the core. I really look forward to reading more of your work.
Thanks again and my very best to you for everything!
Cheers!!
Chhaya
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You’re too sweet and I love your work!
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And you’re very kind to think so, Srijan. Thanks! 😊
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such a beautiful poem, loved it!
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Jeremy, what a brilliant writer you are! I am so glad to have come across your site. And thanks so much for visiting my blog and for paying a read. Your kind comment really means a lot.
Cheers and happy writing to you!
~Chhaya
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Likewise! Appreciate you checking out my writing, am flattered by your feedback. You are also an excellent writer! Keep it up.
~Jeremy
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Thanks, Jeremy! I look forward to reading more of your posts. 😊
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I never imagined flying ashes could appear this beautiful! This poem is wonderfully penned!
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Thanks so much dear friend for the read and the kind comment! I am so glad you enjoyed this piece. 😊
Your writings are beautiful and I look forward to reading more of your work.
Cheers and best wishes!
~Chhaya
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Thank you so much! That really means a lot…
Best wishes to you too!
Harsh. 🙂
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Thanks, Harsh! 😊
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There seems to be a problem, I am unable to follow your blog… 😐😅
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Nope, it’s alright now… sorry 😂😂😂
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Hahaha…Yeah, the notification says that you have followed. Perhaps some technical glitch it was earlier. 😁
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its sweeeeettttt . if ashes find him also dreaming of me ( and not football for sometime) i would be the happiest soul ❤
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Hahaha! Well, I am sure he must be dreaming of you, you’re such a lovely lady afterall. 😊
And thanks for the read and the kind comment dear. I penned something after a long time and I am glad you liked it. Hope you’ve been well.
Much love!
❤️❤️❤️
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mmhm i have been well .. and i hav written something too id really appriciate if u read that..
thank u<3
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Of course, I would. 😊
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Yay! I’ve missed reading your work. This is so moving 🙂 I love the imagery of the ashes – spot on!
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So good to hear from you my dear and thanks very much for the kind words of appreciation!
I am only trying to be back on my writing after a gap of three months, and it really is a great push to know that you missed my poems. Thanks again and I am truly excited about catching up on all of your beautiful writings. 🤗
Much love!
❤️❤️❤️
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No problem lovely lady. It’s always a pleasure reading your captivating poems❤❤
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That means so much to me. Thanks very much!❤️ 🤗❤️
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