In this
vicious
mean world
no I won’t
cover up
the dents of
thrashes of time
that adorn my life
for I am the moon
deeply in love
with its craters.
– Chhaya
When reluctance gives in to the urge of expression….
In this
vicious
mean world
no I won’t
cover up
the dents of
thrashes of time
that adorn my life
for I am the moon
deeply in love
with its craters.
– Chhaya
Lovely!
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Thanks so much, Roy ! 😊
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This is so jadingly beautiful 🙂
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Thanks so much, Archana ! Glad that you liked it. 😊
Much love !
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Inspirational! Love who we are with all our craters.
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Thanks so much for the read and the kind comment dear friend ! I am glad you enjoyed it. 😊
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You are most welcome, friend. I enjoyed it very much! 🙂
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Perfectly imperfect…Imperfectly perfect!!!
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Heyy dear….thanks so much ! That’s such a perfect thought to go with the poem. 😊
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👌👌
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Thanks, Damini ! 😊
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Commendably awesome Chhaya…..as always
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Thanks a ton darling ! You’re my constant motivator. 😊
Much love !
💓😘💓😘
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I read such a poem now.. About Moon’s crater
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You mean to say that you read another poem like this, is it ? Sorry, I didn’t get you.
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Yes I read another poem.whre they talked about it
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Poignant yet again.
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Thanks so much dear D ! Wrote after quite some days as haven’t been keeping well. So glad that you enjoyed it. 😊
Much love !
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Yes I have observed only couple of posts recently from your side.
Hope you are well now.
Much love.:)
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Yes, a little better. 😊
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Yaasss! Embrace yourself and embrace your light despite the darkness around!
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Absolutely ! Thanks for the read and the lovely comment, Ameena. It’s great to hear from you after long. Hope you’ve been well. 😊
Much love !
Chhaya
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That’s a beauty, Chhaya! The strength to be so…
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That’s true, Vidur. Thanks ! 😊
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Such strong words…wonderful…
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Thanks so much, Sangbad ! 😊
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Welcome
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The skill to say a lot in a short piece of poetry is one of the greatest, and you undoubtedly possess it. I could relate very well to your poem because I’m also sick and tired of the eclipse we have to display to the world to hide our craters.
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Dear Anisha, it’s lovely to hear from you. My apologies for a late response as I have not been keeping too well. But just wanted to thank you for taking out time to read my poem and for the lovely comment. Your generous words of appreciation mean a lot to me.
I love your writings and look forward to reading more from you. 😊
Much love !
Chhaya
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It’s OK, Chhaya. Hope you get well soon. I’m glad you like my writings and your feelings are sincerely reciprocated.
Cheers!
Anisha
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Thanks, Anisha ! 😊💓
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This poem is really good and very visualized by what your emotions pour into paper. 🙂
I am back! and I miss reading your work so much. P.S Stop by my blog for a surprise. 🙂
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Hey, Charlie ! I am sorry for my long absence. For some time I wasn’t keeping well and then this work pressure turned out to be oh so consuming. Just trying to squeeze out time somehow to write a bit in between. I too missed reading your thought provoking posts all this while, but I promise to visit your blog very soon. Thanks for your lovely comment on this piece and for bringing a smile on my face amidst all the chaos I am surrounded with at work. 😁
Cheers !
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It’s quite alright my friend. You are such a great person. Thank you for you always being you. 🙂
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Excellent..
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Thanks so much, Ankan ! I am sorry I have been almost absent from the forum for a while and couldn’t follow your posts. Will stop by your blog soon. Hope you’ve been well. 😊
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Yeah I m fine…it’s ok…sometimes waiting is good…☺☺😊
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Love it, my dear!
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Great to hear from you, Joseph ! I am glad you enjoyed this piece. Thanks very much ! 😊
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You’re very welcome! And I need to reply to your email still…I’ve been woefully behind!!!!
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No problem, Joseph ! Take your time. 😊
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Short but powerful ink
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Thanks a lot, Mark ! Sometimes it’s just better to keep it short for a greater impact. 😊
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Hey Chhaya!
So just read this poem!
This is truly heart curdling and heart touching!
Kudos!
Keep Writing!
Following….
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Thanks so much Tanmay for sparing time out of your day to read my poem and for the lovely comment. Means a lot to me. You are a wonderful writer and I very much look forward to reading more from you. 😊
Happy writing and cheers !! 😀
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Anytime
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its short but its sweet !!! i lov it
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Thank you ! I am glad you enjoyed it. I wish I knew your name. 😊
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Animisha
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What a lovely name, Animisha ! 😀
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😳😊 glad u liked it
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Wow!! Lovely… ♥️
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Thanks so much dear ! A short little one yet again, for a change. 😁
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Beautiful piece. 🙂
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Such deep meaning in such small poem… OMG ..!! Didi.. I Love You…. !! This one is lovely..
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So glad you enjoyed this, Siva. Sometimes feelings are better conveyed in few words than more. Thank you for the read and the lovely comment. Love you too. ❤️🤗❤️
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