If I place in front of you
all the broken pieces of me
like an inexplicable puzzle
would you even try
to put my fragments together ?
a yes would be an easy answer
for it would bring relief
even in disbelief
but you can choose
to say no without a flinch
or just nothing at all
to escape the guilt
and I would still comprehend
the response through your silence
a skill which I discreetly learned
being in the company of those
who displayed an act of
perfect pretence
by creating an awkward calm
when my simple questions
would be received as
complex inquisitions
choking their throats
and clogging their mouths
for honest answers
demanded courage
which their virtuous selves
did barely possess
so you can tell me the truth
without feeling throttled
as a no wouldn’t mean
I would give up on you
for I can still put my pieces together
and still mend my broken self
the trick was only to see
if you would want to bear my pain
for to live with false assurances
can be very elevating at times
but I would always prefer the ground
than gliding on illusory skies.
-Chhaya
Another really deep meaning poem i love reading your blog so deep and intence i wish i could write as good as you do
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Hey Mark…thanks so much for your generous words of compliment ! So glad to know that you enjoy my writings. You are a fantastic writer and I admire your work as much. Posted today after quite a gap, have very busy with work past some days. Haven’t been able to follow much of the posts as well. Hope you’ve been well Mark ! Take care !
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Thank you for your kind words glad to see you back writing it’s always hard when you work as well
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Yes, Mark….at times the work consumes every bit of your energy and time. I will be reading your posts soon. 😀
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Wow, wow, wow, deep!
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Thanks so much Kunal ! Lovely to hear from you. I am so glad u enjoyed the read. Hope you are good !
Cheers !!
Chhaya
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Thank you, I am. The usual, a little bit of work and some writing! 🙂
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Great ! 😀
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Its beautiful. Loved the way you wrote your feelings
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Thanks so much Rushaan ! I am all smiles ! 😊
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Welcomeeeeeee
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Girllll, I love this. It basically said the words I wanted to say. I love how the words flowed, despite being a free verse, I read it out loud and it had a beautiful rhythm to it.
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Heyyy Ameena ! Feels great to hear from you after long. I am thrilled to know that you enjoyed the poem. Thanks so much for your kind words of compliment ! I have been very irregular with my posts lately, essentially because of work deadlines and hence have not even been able to follow others’ posts. I missed reading your poems all this while but would try to make time to read them now. Hope you have been well, Ameena ! Take care. 😊
Much love and hugs !
Chhaya
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This is so beautiful
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Thanks a lot Nidhi ! Glad that you enjoyed it ! 😊
Much love !
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Great post…after a short pause though…☺☺👍…happy blogging…👍👍😊
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Thanks so much Ankan ! Yes, it was after a gap that I posted. Too occupied with work. How about you ? How have you been ?
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Same here…occupied…but I guess u can never get rid of those inner inspirations…writing is to be free of everything…it was great seeing ur post after that gap…carry on…☺☺👍
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So true, Ankan ! Writing is to be free of everything….how beautiful is this thought !
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Very deep…interesting !
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Thanks a lot Tushita ! Glad that you liked it ! 😊
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Deeply heartfelt and one of my favorite poems by you. 🙂
You really know how to capture human emotion.
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Hey Charlie….you made my heart sing with your lovely words of compliment ! I am thrilled to know that you enjoyed it. Thanks so much for always being so encouraging ! It means a lot to me. 😊
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Encouragement is happiness, support, and joy.
🙂
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Thanks so much Charlie ! You are a beautiful soul and I am so glad to have you here and be able to connect with you.
Have a great weekend and much happiness and peace to you ! 😊
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I really love this one! So much feels! And by the way, can we do some collaboration to increase the engagements of both of our blog? I also do poems and prose. Just contact me with my email, emmausrubio00@gmail.com
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Thank you so much Isaiah for taking out time to read my poem and for your lovely comment ! I am glad you enjoyed it ! 😊
You are an amazing writer and I would certainly love to collaborate with you. I look forward to reading more from you. Keep writing and happy blogging ! 😁
Cheers !
Chhaya
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I lack words lts a beautiful piece
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Thanks so much my dear friend ( I wish I knew your name) ! I feel humbled by your generous words of appreciation. It means a lot to me. 😊
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The name’s Derrick
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Thanks Derrick….and it’s lovely to connect with you. 😊
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Wow!!! Amazing thought.. I am not qualified enough to comment anything else about such a great poem which is a harbinger of such an intricate yet subtle thought….
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I am truly humbled by your generous words of appreciation Abhishek. This means a lot to me and I am thrilled to know that you enjoyed my poems. 😁
You are a wonderful writer and I look forward to reading more from you.
My very best to you for everything !
Cheers !!
Chhaya
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Love this!!
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Thanks so much Joseph ! Hope you’ve been well. 😊
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clogging their mouths
for honest answers
demanded courage
which their virtuous selves
did barely possess
Again, sheer brilliance. You have such a wonderful way of building to moments that blow us away then make us fall so you can do it again. I’m so lovin’ this!
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Thanks so much Faith ! You are very encouraging and I am so thrilled to know that you are enjoying my work. 😊
Much love !! 😘😘
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Me again……. I’m not a writer, a blogger yes, but not a writer. I paint and cook, but there have been times when words beautifully woven sit before me like a ‘well oiled dish’. You serve that dish again and again. I have to come back for more.
Faith
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Faith, you are such a nice, generous and kind soul to be saying all of this. I feel so glad to have this chance of connecting with you. You have got an extremely insightful and informative blog and I am certainly going to look forward to reading more from you.
Please do visit again.😊
My very best to you for everything my dear friend !
Love and peace to you !!
Chhaya
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Choking their throats
Clogging their mouths
Wow
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Thanks a lot dear friend ! Glad that you enjoyed it ! 😊
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Beautifully written
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Thanks a ton Barkha ! I am so glad you liked it. 😊
Your writings are beautiful and I am excited about reading more from you. 😀
Much love !
Chhaya
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thank you😇😇
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