Right at the cusp
where my words
merge with your
tender breaths
that’s where
my poems dawn
with a whiff of
iambic rhythm
stirred by
your symphonic
inhales and exhales
and I let
my verses melt
with the touch
of your warm lips
dripping gently
like the blobs of
molten desires
exuding from
the rhyme of
entwined kisses
quietly reciting
rhapsodies of love.
~ Chhaya
your words wash over me like music 💕
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Aww….this made my heart sing! ❤️🤗❤️
This would be the most beautiful compliment I have received on my poem in a long time. Very sweet of you, Shreya! Thank you very much for the read and your lovely words. 😘
Much love!
❤️❤️❤️
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Enchanting. 🙂
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Thank you very much, my dear friend! I am so glad you enjoyed this. Great to see you here and to have your lovely comment. 😊
Cheers! 🌸🤗🌸
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You are very welcome! Good to be here and share in your work. 🙂
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Very kind of you! 🌸🤗🌸
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Masterful! Oooh, I could read this one several times. It’s romantic, soft, and very charming! You tie both stanzas in so nicely. 🌸💜 ~Kelsey
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Hey, Kelsey! It’s deeply gratifying to hear such lovely words from you. I am so glad you enjoyed this piece. Thank you very much for the read and for sharing your kind thoughts. This is very encouraging! 😊🤗
Much love!
🌸❤️🌸
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I am always happy to oblige with the comments! It makes me very happy to spread the love, even if I know I can’t do it all the time; all the same, this piece definitely deserved it. You’re welcome! 😌☺️🌸💜
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You’re very kind, Kelsey! 🌸🤗❤️🌸
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This is ethereally romantic. It’s your forte, really my words can’t do justice to praise it.
It’s wonderful. 👍👍👍
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Thanks so much, Aquib! I truly appreciate your kind words. Means a lot! 🌸🤗🌸
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I love how you played with the gems of poetry with that to the love song going on in the background so smoothly.
Your words were the stellar! So damn haunting writing.
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Thank you very much, D! You understand poetry so well, no doubt your observations are always so to the point and so precise. I am glad my words resonated with you. 😀Your comments are always my favourite and I truly appreciate all the love that you send along with your words. 🤗😘🤗
Much love!
❤️😘❤️
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Absolutely breathtaking, Chhaya. This flowed like a dream.
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Hey, Nandita! Thanks so much, dear. Glad you enjoyed this. And it’s always great to hear from you. 🤗
Much love!
❤️🌸❤️
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Beautiful!
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Hey, Mvadi! So good to see you here. Thank you so much for the read and the kind comment! Glad you found beauty in this. 😊
You’re a brilliant writer and I really enjoy your posts. Please keep writing and sharing. I very much look forward to reading more from you. 🤗
Cheers!
🌸🤗🌸
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Hey, Chhaya! The pleasure is all mine. It really is a beautiful piece. I love your writing very much and I thought I’d drop a comment real quick! 😄
Aww, that’s so sweet. Your compliment literally made my day. Thank you so much. You’re such a brilliant writer yourself. And I’ll keep definitely keep writing (I might just post more now haha!🙈)
Have an amazing day! Lots of love 😘
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Wow! it’s like rhythm flowing through the wind!
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Hey, Vidhi! Thanks so much for the lovely comment, dear! I am so glad you enjoyed this piece. 😊 It’s great to see you here on my page after quite some time. Hope you’ve been well. 🤗
Much love!
❤️🌸❤️
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Dripping with heavy, languorous intent. Your writing speaks … ❤️
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Hey, Diana! Very sweet of you to think so. Your words are like bliss……I am all smiles. 🤗
Thank you! 🤗😘
Much love!
💕❤️💕
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Smile on sunshine, and have a wonderful weekend of words and more…! ❤
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Just beautiful!
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Thank you very much, my dear friend! I am so glad you enjoyed this. 🤗
And it’s lovely to hear from you after long. Hope you’ve been well. 😊
Much love!
🌸❤️🌸
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You’re very welcome!
(We’re dealing with some health issues with my husband, which is why i’m not around so much. But we’re okay, thanks).
Hope you’re well! 🌸💕
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Oh! Sorry to know that. I hope he gets well soon. Please accept my best wishes. Take care, darling!
Hugs! 🤗😘🤗
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Thank you so much. You’re lovely.
🤗🌼
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Oh just so beautiful, Chhaya! 👍🙂
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Thanks so much, Vidur! 😊 Happy to know you liked it. 🌸🤗🌸
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Deeeeep sigh !!!! Love this love this. , Chaaya, something came from your heart and it touched the hearts who read.
God bless 🤗💖
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It’s a deeply gratifying feeling to be told this, Yassy.😊Thanks so much! You’re very kind my dear. 🤗
Much love!
🌸❤️🌸
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Bless your quill and the thoughts that make the ink sacred.
Have a safe weekend.
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Thanks, Yassy! And a safe and wonderful weekend to you too. 🌸🤗🌸
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Aha so beautiful..each words is doused with love.
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Aww…. thank you, Megha! I am glad you could feel the love enveloped in this poem. Always a pleasure to hear from you, dear! 🤗😘
Much love!
🌸❤️🌸
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This was so beautiful. I wrote something very similar ” Origin”..Let me now your thoughts. feels like we sensed it the same way.
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Sweetie, I have nominated you for an award. Check out my recent post.
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So so beautiful. Magical words
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Awesome!!
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lovely and sensual…I could hear your voice… this piece of poetry is a river that finds its waterfall
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🔥🔥 as always
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Wow these words really got me with a mixture of feelings! That was nice!
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Romantic.
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Very tender and sensual while maintaining a measure of innocence. It feels like being close to someone.
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Pure☀️
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Brilliantly Gorgeous
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Your first few lines are breathtaking! They drew me in instantly to the rest of the poem! Really well done, C!
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Hey, Kunal! Thanks so much. Always a pleasure to hear from you. Hope you’ve been well. Warm greetings for the new year. And I missed reading you past few months. 😊
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You’re welcome! All good here, thanks! And come on over, anytime! Look forward to seeing you… take care!
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