Riverine

You flow through me
like a sparkling untamed river
majestic and unsurpassed
navigating through
my brown sedimentary skin
caressing my body
with gush of lustrous waves

your sensuous gentle ripples
stir my phlegmatic desires
like a ferocious deluge
hitting a comatose coast
and I bend and curve
through your smooth meanders
conforming to your silent urges

Oh! can’t you see ?
I am all riverine tonight.

~ Chhaya

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    1. Thank you very much, dear friend! Great to see you here and to have this lovely comment. I am glad you enjoyed this, especially the ‘comatose coast’ thing….lol. That was very sweet of you to point that out. 😁

      You’re a wonderful writer with a great depth of emotions, I must say. It’s wonderful to come across you and to be able to experience your amazing craft of poetry. I look forward to reading more of your work. πŸ€—

      Cheers!
      🌸🌸

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      1. What a lovely response. πŸ™‚ Had I said, “Hey, nice assonance,” as I initially considered, I wonder if it would have been so… πŸ€”πŸ˜ Your writing is excellent; I, too, look forward to more. Thank you

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    1. Hey, Tanushree! How lovely to hear from you! I am so happy you found beauty in this piece of poetry and that you could feel what it tries to convey. Nothing could be more satisfying than this for a poet. Thank you very much! 😊

      You write beautifully and I really enjoy your posts. Keep writing and sharing. πŸ€—

      Much love!
      ❀️❀️❀️

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    1. How wonderful it is to hear this from my favourite poetess whom I so deeply admire! Thank you my dear for all your words of appreciation. They really mean a lot to me. πŸ€—

      Much love!
      ❀️😘❀️😘

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  1. I know this poem is meant to have a sexual undertone (which, to be honest, is not really my cup of tea) but for me it conveyed the feeling of an intense and powerful emotion flowing through one’s body, like when you’ve just fallen in love, or immense hatred for someone, or the bliss of having done something really well- you get the idea.
    Good job with this poemπŸ‘

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    1. Hey, Anisha! So good to hear from you. Thank you for sharing your beautiful thoughts on the poem. I find it really amazing how different readers can interpret the same poem in different ways. I think, that’s the whole beauty about poetry. It makes you think and let’s you comprehend and feel words in a way you can best relate to. I am so glad you spared time to read and feel this poem so precisely. Thanks a lot!

      Much love!
      ❀️🌸❀️

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    1. Oh My! You never fail to make me smile, Megha! 😊 Such a lovely gesture this is and I am so glad that you found my work worth this honour. Thank you very much! You’re really kind and an absolute sweetheart. πŸ˜˜πŸ€—

      Much love!
      ❀️❀️❀️

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