Of Promises

I will never hide
the stories
I have piled
beneath my skin
and the pain
I have stashed
under my bones
or the longing
that I breathe
with bruised nostrils
only if you promise
you will never tire of
peeling off the layers
that residues of past
have accumulated
on my body
like rotting scabs.

~ Chhaya

 

 

 

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    1. You’re a darling, D! It’s actually embarrassing how I consistently keep failing at being regular on this forum, despite all my efforts…lol! But I am glad with such lovely friends like you, it always feels like home to be back. Thanks for always being there, encouraging and inspiring me. 🤗

      Much love!
      ❤️❤️❤️

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    1. Thanks so much, Riya for stopping by here and for the kind comment! I am so glad you enjoyed this. 😊

      Your have got an interesting blog and I look forward to reading more from you. Keep writing and sharing. 🤗

      Much love!
      ❤️❤️❤️

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    1. Thanks so much, Rachel! That’s a lovely compliment to have. Simple things are easy to interpret and comprehend I believe. That also makes it convenient for my readers to connect with me, I guess. Thanks again for your kind thoughts and appreciation. 🤗

      Much love!
      ❤️❤️❤️

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    1. Thanks a lot, Adaria (what a lovely name you have) ! I am glad you enjoyed this. It’s in fact great to see you here and have your kind thoughts on my poem. 😊

      You are such a brilliant writer and I am really impressed by whatever little I could read of you yet. I very much look forward to reading more from you. Do keep writing and sharing. 🤗

      Much love!
      ❤️❤️❤️

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      1. Thank you so much! Adaria is actually the name of my imaginary planet. My name’s Arshia 🙂
        And I’m really looking forward to more of your poetry as well!

        Thank you for the follow 🙂

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    1. Thanks very much, Rulla! I am thrilled to know that you could feel this poem so intensely. I agree, we are all like onions, multi layered, waiting to be peeled off. 🤗

      Thanks again and much love! ❤️❤️❤️

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    1. Dear Khushi, to receive so many comments at once felt like a bunch of surprises one after another. Confused which comment/s to reply to, I later decided to write just one response for all of them. Hope you would be fine with that. 😁

      I am so glad you took out time to visit my page and read my poem. I am even more glad that you found it worth a read and thought of leaving such delightful comments. Thank you very much indeed for the kind words, Khushi. I am truly humbled. 😊

      Let me also take a moment to say that your writings are amazing and I really look forward to reading more of your work. Do keep writing and sharing. 🤗

      Much love!
      ❤️❤️❤️

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    1. Thanks very much dear friend for being here and for taking out time to read this poem. I am so glad you found beauty in this. 😊

      You are a gifted writer and I like the way you express yourself using subtle words with utmost clarity. I would certainly love to read more from you. Please do keep writing and sharing. My very best to you for everything. 🤗

      Cheers!

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    1. Dear Rachel, thanks very much for the read and for your generous words of appreciation. I am so glad you enjoyed this piece and that you could feel the words so closely. 🤗

      You’ve got a fantastic blog I must say and your writings are just beautiful. I very much look forward to reading more of your words. It’s lovely to connect with you
      indeed. 😊

      Much love!
      💖💖💖

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    1. Hey, Megha! Thanks so much for giving it a read and for your kind words. I am so glad you enjoyed this piece of poetry. I have been long away from this forum and hence couldn’t respond to your comment all this while. Have just posted a tiny poem today after months, hope you would be able to take time to read it. 😊

      Your writings are beautiful and I look forward to reading more from you. 🤗

      Much love!
      ❤️❤️❤️

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    1. Thanks so much, Srijana! I am glad you enjoyed the read and found it worth such significant adjective. Please pardon me for a late response as I’ve been inactive on the forum since past few months. A new post is up just today and I would be really happy if you get some time to go through it. 😊

      You’re such an inspiring soul and so are your writings. I very much look forward to reading more from you.

      Much love and power to you, my dear!
      ❤️❤️❤️

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