It’s a brown poem
that I write tonight
immersed in the ink
of your hazel eyes
brown is the shade
of my sublime words
and brown is the tone
of my subtle dactyls
the cadence is brown
the accent is brown
brown the assonance
and the rhythm is brown
the brown caesura
the brown elision
brown is the ellipsis
and refrains are brown
aglow by the touch
of your bronzy skin
the sense, the essence
and the gist is brown
brown are the feelings
brown are emotions
in the cascade of your hair
my verses flow in brown.
– Chhaya
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Thanks dear Sarah ! Hope you enjoyed the read. 😊
Much love !
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Always.
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Beautifully written
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Thanks so much, Payal ! I am glad you liked it. 😊
Much love !
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🙂 🙂
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Oh wow!
This is a surreal poem written by you. So many great lines I can choose with breezy touch to it.
This was a unique poem that I truly loved!:)
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Aww…thanks so much, D ! Feels fantastic to know you liked it. Have just not been able to take out time to write past couple of days. This just came to happen somehow last night. I missed reading your beautiful poems. Will catch up soon. Hope you’ve been well. 😊
Much love !
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I understand that! There are moments that give you a sudden impulse of beautiful thoughts just like you got.
Loved reading your work and would be looking forward to reading more.:)
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Exactly ! That’s what I meant. 😀
Thanks, D ! And I look forward to reading yours. I have already missed a lot.
Love !
💝
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So revitalizing and pretty 🙂
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Thanks so much dear friend for the read and the kind comment ! I am so thrilled you liked this piece. 😊
You no doubt are a blessed writer and your poems are just brilliant. I am really excited about reading more from you.
Much love !
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Its a pleasure to have come across your blog really :’D
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Same here ! 😊😊
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Awesome browny poem.
You made us realise that brown is the new something. You are definitely a cannibal for the chocolates, am I wrong?
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Hi, Aquib ! Thanks for the read. Hope you enjoyed it.
Haha….yeah, I am promoting brown. The poor colour has for long been too neglected.😝
Chocolates…yes, I have a bit of a liking for them, but not to the extent of being a cannibal…lol !
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Your cool, and female version of Nelson nadela, keep up with your spirit, #justiceforall, I stand with you in your movement.#jnueffect.
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Very funny ! 😂😂
So what are you doing in JNU ? PhD ?
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I am not in jnu I am student of science in Jamia.
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Oh…cool ! You mentioned of jnueffect, so I thought may be you’re there.
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Oh, I know. Misunderstanding
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No PhD? (lol)
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Yeah, got it. 😂
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I mean I am craving for bachelor’s degree.
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Great ! My best wishes. 😊
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Now time for my emoji(s). 🙃. May God bless you with success here and in hereafter. 😇☺️☺️
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That’s so sweet of you, Aquib ! Thanks and I wish the same for you and more. 😊
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Can I steal your fingers?
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Why ? Don’t you have yours ? 😝
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They aren’t as good as yours, miss.. 🤗
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Oh God…too cheesy ! 😂😂
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Just the truth.. 😊
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Cheesier ! 😝
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Guess that’s why I am a fat, 90 kilo monster.. 😂
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Really….90 killos, is it ? 😱
You look so lean in your DP though ! Go join a gym. 😝
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Well I am 6’2″.. that’s y I don’t look fat tht much 😂
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Well, then it’s fine according to BMI. You are just overweight by about 2 kilos which I am sure you can easily lose if you stop being as much cheesy as you’re now. 😝
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So you don’t talk or write for overweight guys? 😞
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Huh, where did this come from ? 😵
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From my fat fingers… 😂😂… you actually calculated my BMI.. 😂😂.. that’s cute..
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What’s cute about it…kuchh bhi ? And I didn’t calculate, I have a BMI chart. 😝
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So you did the pains to go through the BMI chart!! Unless it is hanging in front of you… which means you are a gym freak.. which means.. you might have a body which may put me to shame.. which means it’s good to meet good looking people in WordPress.. u won’t feel like balling up and crying.. 😂😭😂😭😂😭😂
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I am simply amazed at how quickly you tend to draw brilliant conclusions based on your logical understanding of every single comment of mine…..most of which, if I may say, make absolutely no sense to me. 😂😂
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I am a Sherlock Holmes fan… My futile attempts… Trying to impress a poetic Goddess… 💁
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Will you please stop calling me that ? 😂😂
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It’s a beautiful poem, Chhaya!
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Thanks so much dear Kriti ! I am so glad you enjoyed it. 😊
Much love !
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Totally browned! 👍
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Haha…too much of brown, is it ?
Anyway, hope browned doesn’t mean you are browned off ! 😂😂
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Never too much….just perfectly toasted! 😂😂😂
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Haha…thanks, it’s such a relief ! 😂😂
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😂😂😂
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Such poems, much wow.
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Humbled by your kind words of appreciation, Ronny. Thanks so much for the read and and the lovely comment ! 😊
Cheers and have a great weekend !
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Reading your blog is a bliss. It’s just amazing. Truly fabulous.
Cheers to you too! 🙂 ❤
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Well…you just made my heart sing by saying this, Ronny ! Thanks so much, it means a lot to me. 😊
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I am glad.
Welcome!! 🙂
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Never knew brown could be so beautiful!!!
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Aww…thanks so much, Shaloo ! I am glad you liked it. Hope you’re having a great weekend. 😊
Much love !
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There’s some Serene qualities in ur words. Loved it.
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That’s so very kind of you to think so, Ankan. Thank you very much ! Hope your Sunday’s going great. 😁
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Yeah so far so good… 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Hw r u??
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Hey ! I am better now….was down with viral fever, throat infection and cold. That’s why I was out of action all this while. Thanks so much for asking, Ankan. 😊
Trust you’re well. I am sure there’s a lot for me to catch up on your blog. 😁
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Yeah I m doing fine…i m also down with fever…btw I m still waiting for your mail though… 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Oh ! Hope you’re taking good care. Get well soon. And yes, I remember about the mail. Will be writing ASAP. 😊
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Thank you… 🙂 🙂
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Always 😊
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Always… 🙂 🙂
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Always… 🙂
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This is a masterpiece.❤
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You must be very kind and generous to think so my dear friend. I am so glad you enjoyed this piece. Thanks for the read and the lovely comment !
Much love !
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Your writings are an art. The way you carve out the words, it’s so much pleasure reading them! Keep up, Chhaya. 🙂
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Thanks so much, Aalekh ! That’s so very kind of you to leave such generous words of appreciation. I am so glad you took out time to read my poems and found them worth it. I must also say that you’re a brilliant writer and I look forward to reading more from you.😊
Also, please excuse me for this much delayed response. I have been away from the forum since past some days.
Take care and keep writing !
Cheers !! 😁
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Wow. Interesting poem. Brown is the new white. But not as bad as white was. And yeah I agree with you that brown has been neglected for a very long time. Colours…and politics.. Sigh! But what a fast paced poem and I simply loved it. It could be a song.. And loved the way you played with words here.. Someone studying linguistics must really enjoy this. ♥️♥️♥️
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https://inkdropblog.wordpress.com/2015/10/24/brown-bears-surprise A brown bears tale wi a twist!
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Hey Brian ! Thanks so much for sharing the link to this wonderful poem. I truly enjoyed it. You are a brilliant poet no doubt. 😊
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Cheers for taking a look!
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Congratulations, i have nominated you for https://punmeet.wordpress.com/2017/08/21/get-to-know-me-child-award/
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Very brown ink
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Haha…yeah ! Thanks for the read. 😊
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chocolate coloured poem (giggles)
its really pretty
n yea i found someone for ur poem and if u dont mind id giv it to him
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Oh wow…that’s a great news my dear friend ! Please go ahead and share it with the one. Do let me know how he felt about the poem. I hope he likes it. 😊
My best wishes to you !
And much love !!
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he loved it😁😁n m like my friend wrotr it so i dedicated it to u …thank u sooooo much chhaya lov u lottsssss tqtqtqtqtqfqtq😘😘😘😘
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This poem is very beautifully penned! Do keep writing… Looking forward to more of such works.
Cheers!
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