Amidst the coarse yarn of
extreme despondency
tangled incoherently
around the strands of life
I have still saved some
silken threads of hope
bundled in a patch of faith
to weave my breaths again
when in shreds
due to lashes of time.
– Chhaya
Reblogged this on O LADO ESCURO DA LUA.
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Thanks so much for the share ! 😊
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Silk threads to create a cocoon from which to metamorphosize.
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Yes, that’s such a wonderful thing ! Thanks for the read and the beautiful comment. 😊
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🙂
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Such an expressive content of written art.😃😃😃 Loved it
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Thanks so much Edwin for your generous words of appreciation ! I am thrilled. 😀😀
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Always glad😊
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😊😊
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And those same silk threads,
Comes into existence,
By a thousand deaths,
Thought for an instance?
It’s better to die
Than keep hope by thousand deaths,
Love is hard to defy,
Along with hope it frets.
Lovely poem Chhaya… Keep putting smile on our faces… May lord give you all you deserve… 😊😊
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Thanks so much Tanay ! I am so glad you liked it. And thanks for your kind wishes, and I wish and pray the same for you.
What you have written totally represents your state of mind right now, Tanay. But I am sure you would get through this, and be back to your smiling and hopeful self soon. Life is beautiful, just try change your lenses ! 😀
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Girls always think men are out of their mind..
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Arreyyy, I didn’t mean that you’re out of your mind. 😂😂
And why generalise ?
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Why not? I am tired of replying to people that i am not committing suicide… especially girls.. 😡
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Look at your poems and previous comments. Who in the world would not think that you are going to kill yourself ? 😂😂
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I wrote about sex too… that doesn’t mean i had sex in my life… 😢
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😂😂😂 But just in case !
How would the poor readers even realise that you didn’t mean what you wrote when you give such hopeless responses to their comments… “zinda reh k bhi kya karna hai” types ! 😝
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Sahi h… jata mai… thoda sodium penthanol nd cyanide kharid k ata…
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Jao jao…bill mujhey bhej dena. I will cover your suicide expenses. 😝
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Not for me.. for those who r thinking i m ending my life…
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You want to kill us ? 😱
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You top the list 😂
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Bhalayi ka zamana nahi hai, tabhi kaha tha 😢
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😂😂
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😂😂
😝😝
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Idc… ur loss.. u dnt find 6’2″ poet asking u out everyday… 😎😎
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What’s IDC ?
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I dont care.. 😁😁… actually i do care…. but it’s a secret between us… Shh 🙊
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Oh God ! Why make life so complicated with these short forms for everything ? 😂😂
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You dont text… this is the abbreviation used since Barrack Obama first became president… maybe even before that…
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You have no idea about my ignorance. 😂😂
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I find you as one of the most knowledgeable persons… 😊
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You have no idea about your ignorance too 😂😂
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Yeah.. i know.. i am Jon Snow… 😅
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Uff !!
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Not a GOT fan!! HUMAN spotted…
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I am a rare species you see….haven’t watched even a single episode ! 😂😂
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And i guess you are proud of it.. 🙄
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No, what’s there to feel proud about ?
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Good.. Now i term you as a complete human.. u shud watch though.. it is nice… full of killings and deaths and bloodshed.. 😍
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Not my thing !
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Why? U r 13 reasons why types?
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Never watched any series.
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I was like you… a year back.. only into novels.. then i crushed on a girl.. she liked tv series… i watched all her fav shows… i got things to talk about.. 😂
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Haha…so cute. Love is strange, it can make you do things you had never thought about even in your weirdest dreams.
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Yeah.. she didnt love me.. i tried so hard and got so far.. but it doesn’t even matter… 😬
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Hota hai, hota hai ! Such is life.
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Only for guys… anyways i still love her… she is nice.. 😊… maybe one day i will find someone who would love me the same way… till then i should keep knifes, ropes at bay.
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Hahaha….of course you will find the one. Just don’t die till then. 😝
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I guess.. and i hope.. keep your poems coming.. they are an escape from my misery…
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Sure…you will see them often on your reader. And I am glad you find an escape in my poems….it means a lot. 😊
Cheers !!
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Cheers!! Look out for the smell from your coffee though 😂…
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Such evil thoughts ! 😂😂
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I am doing my assignment… i will get back to you later… with my further evil thoughts…
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Yeah…sure. 😊
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Wow! I am glad to read some postive work here.
Such a mesmerizing poem woven by you.Thanks for this Chhaya!:)
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Thrilled to hear from you, D ! And thanks for the lovely comment. 😊
Are you on your much needed break already ?
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Yes I am on my break.It was so tiring all the work and writings.
Thankyou for your words.:)
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Good good ! Hope you have a pleasant soulful time with yourself. You shared a few posts though I saw. Will check them out soon.
Take care, D !
More love !
💝
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Beautiful.as always..
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Thanks so much ! I am glad you enjoyed this piece. 😊
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Hopes never die. ☺️☺️☺️.
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Yeah, they should never die. Thanks for the read, Aquib ! I look forward to reading your posts. 😊
Cheers !
Chhaya
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Thanks, do read my posts I would surely I appreciate it.
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Sure, I will ! 😊
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A wonderful weave of hope in words, Chhaya 👍
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Haha…thanks so much, Vidur ! 😁
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Wow, this is so marvelous! Concise yet contains clever imagery. The whole of existence mapped in the form of yarn. 🙂
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Deeply humbled by your kind words of appreciation. I am so glad you liked it. Thanks so much for the read and the lovely comment indeed ! 😊
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Beautifully moving x
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Lovely to hear from you, Rachel ! Thanks so much for the kind comment. I am glad you enjoyed this piece. I love your writings and look forward to reading more from you. 😊
Much love !
💓💓💓
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Cleverly done
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Haha….yeah, sometimes I get clever too ! 😂😂
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Oh this is so beautiful!!
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