The rains once again
are here to remind
how fervently I loved you
with every bit of my might
falling from the vertex
of boundless soars
touching upon the depths
unbridled and unfathomed
sometimes like a drizzle
soothing and divine
and sometimes like a deluge
ravaging and unconfined
from silent and serene
to loud as a roar
from quiet and calm
to intense like a clamor
I fell on the trees
on the glass and the stones
on the earth and concrete
into the sea and the shores
sometimes I seeped in
through the pores of your skin
and sometimes I slipped
down your edges, slants and slopes.
– Chhaya
I would love to see some of your writing submitted to the writing prompts.
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Aww….thanks so much, Kindra ! Hopefully soon. And many thanks for the read and the reblog. 😊
Much love !
Chhaya
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You’re so welcome. ❤
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😊😊
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Reblogged this on Kindra M. Austin and commented:
Another stunning wordsmith.
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Beautiful, love the ending.
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Thanks very much ! I am so glad to know you enjoyed it. 😊
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Peace
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To you too, dear friend ! 😊
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Love is like this so I say rain on. I love the imagery in this piece, Chhaya 🙂
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Thanks so much, Percy ! Great to know you liked this piece. And yes, let it rain on. 😊
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My pleasure, Chhaya 🙂
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😊😊
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Love, love the smiles 🙂
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Always ! 😊😊
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Yay! 🙂 🙂
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Beautiful analogy!
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Thanks very much, Shaloo ! It just came to my mind and I penned it. 😀
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Love rain poems that permeate the mind such great word play
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That’s very kind of you to think so, Mark. Thanks so much ! 😊
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Tastes like rain…beautiful…👍👌
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How kind of you to think so ! Thanks very much, Ankan ! 😊
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Well…always..😊☺
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Hahaha… !! 😂😂
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This is divine I woul say.
Your poems are always lucid,soft and amazingly crafted.
Loved this one!:)
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You just made my heart sing ! 😀
Thanks a ton, D ! Deeply humbled by your generous words of appreciation. You have been so encouraging ! 😊
Much love !
💓💓💓
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I love to read good work that includes you.
Glad I could resonate well with your emotions too.
Lots of love darling. Smiles.:)
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That’s very kind of you, D ! 💝
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🙂
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Beautiful poem.. amazing..
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Thanks for the read and the kind comment, Neha ! I am so glad to know that you enjoyed it. Do keep visiting. 😊
Much love !
Chhaya
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I loved all of it but the best part for me was…
sometimes I seeped in
through the pores of your skin
and sometimes I slipped
down your edges, slants and slopes.
So so deep….so good❤
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Tapasi, thanks for the lovely comment, and for the read of course ! I am so glad you liked this piece. 😊
Your writings are beautiful and I look forward to reading more from you.
Much love !
Chhaya
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Thank you so much Chhaya for checking out my writings, I love your writings too. Much love❤❤❤
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Thanks Tapasi and have a good night ! 😊
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❤went to bed early yesterday.
Good morning and have a great day😊
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Thanks so much and a great day to you too, Tapasi ! 💝
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Lovely, Chhaya….and a beautiful analogy!
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Thanks so much, Vidur ! Glad that you liked it. 😊
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And one day…
I would escape out…
Of your bounds, away…
From your web of perfect poetry…
I would escape…
From your trap of words…
The words which make me…
Fall more into your skills…
And one day i would move on…
From your syllables…
And that day… would be when i am no more…
Never cease to impress me… 😊😊
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Oh Gosh ! This has to be one of my favourite comments ever ! So spontaneous and so very impressive indeed. I truly value the time that you spare to read my poems and the generosity with which you appreciate my work, Tanay. Thanks so much, for always bringing a smile on my face. 😊
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Thanks for bringing smile on my face.. and i have done nothing.. 😊
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That’s sheer modesty on your part. 😊
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No… 🤗… i gain from your words.. you have been one of my inspiration all this time..
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Oh my ! Thanks, it’s an honour to hear that. While we are all here to get inspired, in the process we never realise that we are also leaving behind our own words and wonderful pieces of art to inspire others…..isn’t it so beautiful ? Hence, just know that you and your writings are already an inspiration to many, including me. 😁
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How can it even possible? It’s hardly possible to inspire someone you look upon as your inspiration 😊
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Come on ! There’s something called mutual inspiration. 😀
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Yes… 10% by me… 90% by you… 😬
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Very funny ! 😝
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That’s the truth miss 🙄🙄
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In return i have done next to nothing for you.
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That you read my poems and take time to share your genuine thoughts on them, is more than anything that you could have done. And who said you have to do something for me anyway ? 😊
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World has less of givers… why not do something for someone.. and try to balance it a bit..
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It’s a lovely thought indeed ! 😊
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Yes it is… 😊😊
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😊
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That’s beautiful.
Rain is an uncontrollable force. It can be gentle or destructive. Its not held by our boundaries. It’s free to go where it pleases.
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Thanks, Faith ! It’s always a pleasure to hear from you. I love the way you interpret my poems and take time to share your thoughts with me. This means a lot to me. Hope you’ve been keeping well ! 😊
Much love !
Chhaya
💓💓💓
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It shows how passionate you feel about love and the desire of what love is and truly holds in one’s heart.
I felt this right in my heart and you have really written something special here. 🙂
Thank you for you always being you.
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That’s very kind of you indeed to say so. Love is what brings us hope in this terribly hopeless world that we are turning into, I guess. I just want to keep holding on to it. Thanks for the read and the lovely comment, Charlie ! 😊
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Indeed. Love is the key force and power for us humans to heal from the bad.
You make the world a better place.
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You too, Charlie ! 😀
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🙂
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Chhaya to be honest your poems are Intense its amazing to follow every step of your work
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That means so much to me, dear friend (I wish I knew your name) ! I truly appreciate you taking out time to read my work and for the beautiful comment. I am deeply humbled. Thanks so much and it’s lovely to connect with you ! 😊
Cheers !
Chhaya
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You sometimes forget it’s Derrick
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Oh, Derrick ! My sincere apologies for this. Such poor memory I have got, it gets a little embarrassing at times.
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Truly breathe taking how your work can just grab your reader by the heart and wring out such strong and robust feelings and empathy. I love your reading your pieces they give the gift of inspiration to your fellow creators and readers alike and I’m sure they have birthed thousands of pieces from the sheer emotion that comes from reading your works. It would be an honor to repost some of your works on my Facebook page.
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That’s very kind of you to think so highly of my work, David ! I am honoured and deeply touched. I simply write what’s there in my head and heart with deep honesty, and I think that’s what makes my poems resonate with a lot of readers. I can only thank you for always taking out time to read my work and for the lovely thoughts that you share on them. It would indeed be a great honour for me if you share my work on your FB page. 😊
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Rainyyyyyy poem…. ❤ ❤
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Haha….yeah ! Thanks for the read and the rainy comment. 😊
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Oh this is a wonderful poem…talks volumes about the depth of love the poet feels here… Just love this one ♥️
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Thanks so much ! It had been raining, and I couldn’t resist penning something around it. Glad you liked it ! 😀
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Deep and excellent!
xx
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Thanks very much, Maher ! I am so glad you enjoyed this piece. 😊
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Ah the rain…something I can relate to (the Horizontal Sort!). Plenty of weather stuff on the profile Chhaya – but here’s my latest c/o the daily post….https://inkdropblog.wordpress.com/2017/07/27/hidden-2/
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A amazing poem dear poet. Love need chance, luck and two people wanting the same things.
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Thanks a lot John for taking out time to read my poems and for your kind words of appreciation. Yes, love is all about find the right person at the right time, I so agree with you. 😊
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You are welcome my friend. Love is a rare gift we shall know.
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😊😊
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Reblogged this on johncoyote and commented:
Please read the amazing poetry of a talented writer.
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Thanks very much, John ! I am glad you found my poem worth sharing. 😊
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I did and you are welcome. A amazing poem.
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😊😊
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Reblogged this on Flawed Masterpieces and commented:
Beautiful poem by a lovely writer.
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Thank you ! 😊
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Reblogged this. eautiful poem BTW!
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Thanks so very much, Michael ! I am glad you found my work worth sharing. Your writings are great and I am excited about reading more from you. 😊
Cheers !
Chhaya
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Reblogged this on Ellie belfiglio and commented:
Please read and enjoy this great post of a friend and a talented writer, John.
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Thanks so much Ellie for the kind words. I am so glad you found my poem worth sharing on your blog. I think you got my name wrong, it’s Chhaya and not John. 😊
You’re a wonderful writer and I look forward to reading more from you.
Cheers !
Chhaya
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Reblogged this on O LADO ESCURO DA LUA.
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Thank you so much for sharing ! 😊
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Wonderful workk!!
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Thanks so much ! I am glad you enjoyed it. 😊😊
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Thanks so much for linking it with your blog. I am glad you found it worth it. 😊
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Beautiful💜💜
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Loved your poem it is really good.
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Ahhh….the autumn rain, how I know it….horizontal 😉 nice piece Chhaya
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A memory of love unfolds with every drop of rain. Thank you for the words which triggered a heavy rain inside me.
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