I am betraying my dozy eyes
and keeping my dreams at bay
until I find your arms
to put me to sleep again
I desist the calmant of night
and decline the salve of moon
for the only sedative I need
is to be gently caressed by you.
-Chhaya
When reluctance gives in to the urge of expression….
I am betraying my dozy eyes
and keeping my dreams at bay
until I find your arms
to put me to sleep again
I desist the calmant of night
and decline the salve of moon
for the only sedative I need
is to be gently caressed by you.
-Chhaya
Holy hell. That is beautiful. Like seriously I want to post that on facebook or something so others can see it. Short but with all the impact of the ocean.
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Thanks so much, David ! Your kind words of appreciation mean a lot to me. I am so glad that you enjoy my work. Thanks again ! 😊
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As always….. beautiful
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Thanks so much dear ! I am so glad you liked it. 😊
Much love !
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Short, precise and perfect one… Lovely creation indeed… liked it.. 🙂
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Thanks so much Ashish for the read and the lovely comment ! I am so thrilled to know that you liked this piece. 😊
You’ve got a very interesting blog and I am excited about reading more of your work.
Cheers !
Chhaya
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Its my pleasure to know that you like my literary pieces… I am trying to be more active in blogging.. Last day I posted something which can make readers laugh… just trying on different genre… Hope you will enjoy reading it… 🙂 Here is the link..
https://ashishvision.wordpress.com/2017/06/27/unnecessary-laughs/
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Thanks Ashish ! I will certainly read your post. 😊
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I really love the way you write… Using words like sedative… I thought u were writing about some dental experience when I saw the title… but it was a beautiful surprise.
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Hahaha….yes, I was actually about to write about a dental experience but then changed my mind after first two lines !! 😝
I am glad you enjoyed this disoriented piece of poetry ! 😀
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A disorientation like this is way better than the oriented ones.. 😁
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Hahaha…I assure you, you will never find a dearth of disorientation in my poems 😝
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There is a saying I believe in; When it comes to that one girl, you lust the perfections in her but fall in love with her imperfections… so I guess… once in a while… disorientations should be there… so that I can keep falling in love with your work… 😊
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Wow ! You are welcome to romance with my disoriented poems…lol !! 😝
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Haha.. I would promise to keep your poems safe in my heart 😂😉…
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😂😂😂 Cool !!
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Posting daily…nice one…
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Arreyy nahi yar….trying to get regular again, par lagta nahi hai ho payega ! 😝
Thanks for the read and the like, Sangbad. It’s always a pleasure to hear from you. 😀
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Welcome…
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as usual poignant ..lovely
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Thanks very much ! 😊
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Martian here
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Cool ! Welcome back.
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Ty
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This is really adorable and pleasant to read.
Love, D!
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Thanks so much, D ! You’ve been so very encouraging. 😊
Loads of love !
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You deserve it love.:)
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😀😀
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Wow
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Thanks so much Mokshda ! Glad that you
enjoyed it. 😊
Much love !
Chhaya
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Great work chaya…as always….so talented.
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Thanks so much ‘Luffy’ !! I am glad to know that you enjoy my writings. You have got an interesting blog and I look forward to read more from you.😊
Cheers !
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Yeah…thanks to u….if u say i am good…i am good…i trust u.
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Sedated by this! 🙂
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Sedated by your comment ! 😁
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😂
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Haha…
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Very good as always! 🙂
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That’s very kind of you to say so. Thanks so much ! I am glad you enjoyed this
one. 😊
Much love !
Chhaya
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Awesome piece!!!
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Thanks so much, Roy ! 😀
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Wonderful indeed.
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Thanks so much ! Glad that you liked it . 😊
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Wow. It’s sad and beautiful.
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Yeah, that’s how it was meant to be ! 😁
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Hi. I nominated you for the Blogger Recognition Award. https://astudentoflifeandwriting.wordpress.com/2017/06/29/blogger-recognition-award/
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Deeply and romantically beautiful writing.
I love this very much. 🙂
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Thanks so much, Charlie ! Happy and smiling here. 😊😊
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You welcome my friend. Many blessings to you. 🙂
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😊😊
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Beautiful
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Thanks a lot, Mark ! Glad that you like it. 😊
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im always so excited reading your piece. its lovely
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That’s very kind of you to say so, Korede ! It’s an amazing feeling to know that somebody enjoys your work. Thanks so much ! I enjoy your writings as much ! 😊
Love !
Chhaya
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loved this
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Hey, Capri ! Thanks so much for the read and the kind comment. I am glad you liked it. 😊
Lovely blog you’ve got and I look forward to reading more from you.
Much love !
Chhaya
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and decline the salve of moon 🙂
The elements you mentioned denying are powerful ones. To deny their natural affect as you wait on your love makes for great poetry. 🙂
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Dear Faith, my apologies for such a late response. I had been a little unwell and hence have not been regular on the forum. I truly appreciate you taking out time to read my poems and I must tell you that your ever encouraging comments are like soup for my soul. Thanks a ton !
Much love !
Chhaya
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love
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Thanks, Joseph ! 😊
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Simply pentastic ! Loved it. ❤️
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Thanks so much ! I am so glad you liked it. 😊
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When I start to read this poem i thought this line is the best “Until I find your arms to put me to sleep again”..
But Then at the end i read this “for the only sedative i need is to be gently caressed by you”..
Wow Didi.. Just wow…!!!
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Haha….thanks, Siva! 🤗
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