You were too shallow
to bear the depth of my love
but someday I will find
the soul to hold
the enormous love
which my heart comprise
and the arms to embrace
every fraction of me
through my length and breadth
and the depths inside
the touch which feels
beyond my skin
and the eyes that gaze
beneath my guise
the one who fills
every pore of me
and engulfs my whole
in his amorous zephyr.
-Chhaya
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Thanks so much ! 😊😊
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I am so impressed by your writing! You drew me in with those first two lines!
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Thanks so much ! I am all smiles. 😀😀
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Good god another brilliant piece 🙂 once again love reading your pieces.
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Thanks so much David ! So glad to hear from you. Your kind words of appreciation are a huge encouragement. Hope you’ve been well ! 😊
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I will find the soul to hold the enormous love which my heart comprise..👍 that first para just blew my mind.
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Lovely Jeni, you never miss a chance to bring smile on my face through your ever encouraging comments ! It’s always a delight to hear from you. Thanks so much for the read and your kind words. 😊
Hope life’s great !
Much love !
💓😘💓😘
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Will never miss that golden chance😊😊 keep smiling poet. Much love
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You’re a darling, Jeni !! Take care ! 💝
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And so are you💓💓
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😊
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Masterpiece!
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Thanks so much Anugrah ! Hope you’re having a great weekend. 😀
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You have an amazing way with words! It sounds like a song when I read it! Beautifully penned! 😊
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Deep😯💯
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Thanks a ton ! 😊
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Hi chhaya ma’am, I’ve got 2 new posts up, please check them out, thanks.
-santusht
Inscriptedblog.wordpress.com
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Hey, Santusht ! Sorry, I’ve been away from the forum for a while and have just got back. Will check out your posts soon. And please call me just Chhaya, without ma’am. 😊
Cheers !
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It’s beautiful.
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Thanks so much Abhay ! I am glad you liked it. 😊
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Very beautifully written, i especially love this line “and the arms to embrace every fraction of me through the length and breadth and from the depths inside”. fantastic write up
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Thanks so much dear friend for the read and the kind comment ! I am thrilled to know you enjoyed this piece ! 😊
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My pleasure friend.
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This is absolutely beautiful 🙂
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Thank you so much dear friend ! I am glad you liked it. 😊
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Images of conjured in the mind make you feel the deepness of love and how it needs to be felt in its entirety to satisfy.
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Thanks so much, Mark ! You have expressed the feel of the poem really well. Thanks ! 😊
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No you are the one who has expressed really well for others to understand 😎
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That’s very kind of you to say so, Mark. 😊
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Just one word: Beautiful<3
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Thanks so much dear ! I am glad you liked it. 😊
Much love !!
Chhaya
💓💓💓
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can you be less perfect? Ne can fall for you just by those words… you are awesome…
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Thanks so much Tanay for the read and the kind comment ! To fall for somebody is really easy, the real test is in staying. Perfection…I am not too sure about, but I am really glad you liked my work. 😊
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Wow….I am in love with your poetry….you are such an amazing poetess …this was really beautiful…loved it
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Thanks so much dear for the read and for your kind words of appreciation ! I am so glad to know that you enjoy my poetry. 😊
Much love !
Chhaya
💓💓💓
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Very beautiful.
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Thanks so much dear friend ! It’s great to hear from you after long. Hope you’ve been well. 😊
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Yes, peace to you.
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Awesome!!
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Thanks a lot Roy ! 😊
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Welcome
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😀
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Beautiful!
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Thank you, Vidur ! 😊😊
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Truly defines the beauty of poetry !!
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Thanks so much Aditi for the read and the lovely comment ! That’s very kind of you to say so. 😊
Much love !
Chhaya
💓💓💓
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One words: Gold!
Chhaya, you always know how to capture every human emotion of how we all feel and need to share with the world of reflective experience. Excellent. 🙂
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That’s very kind of you Charlie to say so, thanks so much ! Your kind words are great source of encouragement to me and I really appreciate the time that you spare to read and comment on my poems. Thanks again ! 😊
Hope you’ve been well !
Cheers !!
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I always encourage and support. You are a writer that I favor and want to learn more from you.
🙂
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You are such a kind soul ! I am already learning a lot from you and your writings. Thanks so much for your kind support. 😊
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Your very welcome. You deserve so much happiness. Glad I can be there for you and bring support for your writing. 🙂
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That’s very kind of you, Charlie! It’s a pleasure to connect with you !
Peace and gratitude !
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You make the world a better place.
P.S Got a new poem up. 🙂
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Will check it out ! 😀
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That’s so sensual
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Thanks a lot ! Glad that you liked it. 😊
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Of course yes.our duet is still pending
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Very nicely put! The poetess is very strong here. I like this energy ♥️
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Thanks Tushita for the lovely comment ! Well…you certainly know that the poetess is strong ! 😀
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Nicely composed Chhaya! Most enjoyable read. Thanks for posting.
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Hey, Brian ! Great to hear from you after long. Thanks for your kind comment. I am thrilled to know that you enjoyed it. 😊
Hope you’ve been well ! Take care and have a great weekend. 😀
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👌
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Thanks ! 😊
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M.P
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Actually
When you have lot of love inside of you
The only way you will ever feel complete is by spreading that love wide and far
There is no single human who can take some of love and be still human
You may however choose to share a huge part of it to that special someone
Rest all is for the universe
And finding that special someone is an equally challenging job
Don’t find love
Spread it
Let love come to you
Because there is a dearth of true and honest feeling in the world now.
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That’s true ! I truly appreciate what you have said above. 😊
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Nice
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Thank you ! 😊
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This is beautiful and so relatable
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Thanks so much Kailyn for the read and the kind comment ! I am glad you enjoyed it. 😊
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This is beautiful, I can so relate to your poem. You do have a lot of love inside you to give to the world. 🙂
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That’s so very kind of you to say so. I am so glad you enjoyed this piece. Thanks very much for the read and the lovely comment ! 😊
Love and peace to you !
Chhaya
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That’s what going on inside us! It was like you read my mind. Lovely poem.
What’s your view on this article http://lifebeyondbeliefs.com/being-alone/
Have a lovely day! 🙂
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Thanks so much Vinay for taking out time to read my work and for your kind comment. I am glad you could feel it so deeply. This is what poems are meant for…to be felt and absorbed. 😊
I really liked your blog and would love to read more from you.
My very best to you for everything !
Cheers !! 😀
Chhaya
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Glad to hear back from you Chhaya, Thanks for reading my article. And indeed poems are meant to be absorbed but this one is special, It absorbed me 🙂
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Aww…that means a lot to me, Vinay and it was a pleasure reading your post. 😊
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Beautiful.
I hope you could visit my site too and give feedback on how i can improve it. Thank you.
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Thanks so much dear for the read and the kind comment. I am so glad you liked this piece. 😊
You’re a blessed writer and I am really excited about reading more of your work. I don’t think you need any feedback for improvement, you’re just fantastic !
My very best to you for everything !
Much love !
Chhaya
💓💓💓
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There is some spark in your writing that attracts…..
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Thanks, Gaurav ! That means a lot to me. So kind of you. 😊
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🙂
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My response to your brilliant work, chhaya….https://inkdropblog.wordpress.com/2015/10/24/missing-you/
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May you find that soul soon. Great poem.
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OMG… The first 6 lines… Mind blowing !!!
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Thank you, Siva! Glad you liked them. 🤗
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