I will come out
of this gloom
not for you
but for myself
and I hope that
you come out too
of this despair
not for me
but for yourself
for this darkness
has clung on to our feet
for too long now
restricting us
from stepping out
of this space
full of insecurities
and apprehensions
some yours
and some mine
the residues from the past
the baggage of which
we have been carrying
with us all the time
to burden our present
with the weight of
fears about the future
and while we may say
we tried our best
to pull each other out
of this growing woe
yet we never ceased
to remind ourselves
that we were more vulnerable
than any other soul
well, we don’t realise that
yearning for admiration
and adulation
is even capable of
making us deeply mean
it’s strange though
that we believe that
love can only yield
the most venerable traits
that do exist
so we went on
stretching ourselves
till we could endure
just trying hard
to hold on to each other
for giving up would have meant
that we were callous and unkind
the characteristics which we
the so called “sensitive” beings
don’t want to get labelled by
but how did we forget
there’s a limit to stretching
and someday we would break
and fall far apart
only to realise that
the hold which seemed so tight
had an intent extremely fragile
which crumbled under the grip
and collapsed in a little while
and while the breakage
would certainly be divisive
but may be we would find
some relief in this unbind.
– Chhaya
This was wonderful. Thank you for sharing.
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Dear Angie, such a pleasure to hear from you. I am so thrilled to know that you enjoyed this piece. Thanks for the read and the kind comment ! 😊
Much love !
Chhaya
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This is so beautiful.
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Thanks very much ! I am so glad that you liked it. Your comment means great encouragement. Thanks again. 😊
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Lovely, as usual!
Haven’t seen you around, all ok?
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Hey Kunal, thanks so much for the kind comment ! I have indeed been very irregular with my posts lately. Work has been consuming a lot of my time. Things are all well otherwise. Thanks so much for asking, Kunal. Hope you’re well. 😊
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I am, thanks! Come across some time?
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Beautiful! From the poems I’ve seen, you have a lovely way with words.
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Thank you so much dear friend (I wish I knew your name) for taking out time from your day to read my poem and for the kind comment ! I am all smiles. 😊😊
You write beautifully and I am really excited about reading more from you. Happy writing !
Much love !!
Chhaya
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My name is Georgia 🙂 Your poems are graceful and beautiful! I’m glad you liked my poem, I’m new to this site and was apprehensive about putting it out there!
Thank you, hope to hear more from you in the future, happy writing to you too!
xx
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It’s a pleasure to connect with you Georgia…and what a lovely name you have ! 😊
I too was a very reluctant blogger initially, but I overcame my apprehensions g
with time. I am sure you too would. You are a blessed writer.
Take care and have a great weekend !!
Love,
Chhaya
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Thank you! Have a lovely weekend and keep writing! 🙂 xx
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Thanks Georgia ! 😊
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Lovely write. Deep and meaningful. Loved it 🙂
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Thanks very much, Edwin ! So glad to know that you liked it. 😊
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🙂 🙂
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😊
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Amazing you wrote … I felt a connection 😊
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Thanks so much my dear friend (what name can I call you with ? ) for the read and your kind comment ! I am so glad you liked it and that you could connect with it. You are a wonderful writer and I look forward to reading more from you.
Keep writing ! My very best to you. 😊
Much love !!
Chhaya
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Thank you very much
I am Rida 😊
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Nice to connect with you Rida…and what a lovely name ! 😊
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Thank you 😍
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My pleasure ! 😊
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Simply amazing!!!
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Thanks so much Abhishek ! Have a wonderful weekend ! 😀
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Hey Maryum ! I am glad you made a visit to my blog and took out time from your day to read my poem. Hope you enjoyed it. You are an amazing writer and I very much look forward to reading more from you. 😊
Have a lovely weekend ! 😀
Much love !!
Chhaya
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Hi 🙂 thanks so much. I love your writing as well 🙂
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Thanks Maryum ! 😊
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Fantastic…😊👏👌
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Thank you ! 😁
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You live the true essence of the poem.Great job.
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Thanks so much darling ! You have been very encouraging throughout.
Much love !!
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My pleasure dearie.:)
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Beautifully penned. 🙂
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Thank you so much my dear friend for the read and the kind comment ! I am glad you liked it. 😊
You are a wonderful writer and I really look forward to reading more from you.
Cheers !! 😀
Chhaya
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My pleasure. 😁
Why, thank you. You are too kind to say that. 😊
Cheers.
P.S. Does all your comments have a beginning, a body and a signature? Just curious, that’s all! 😁
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Lol ! Yeah…kind of. I am very bad at taking compliments or words of appreciation. I really like connecting with my readers but I totally fail in bringing variations in my response to their comments. You got me.
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I believe a thank you could do the job. But I understand that you want to be polite and also connect with the people. And I think you really like writing letters. Just saying. 😜
But I think this is cool. Keep doing what you feel would be the best way to connect with people. You surely did leave an impact on me. So cheers. ☺️
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Thank you 😝
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See. Simple and efficient, is it not? 😁😂
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But just a thank you is like…like telling someone “ok, thank you, bye”. It doesn’t leave much scope to connect at a deeper level, no ?
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I completely agree.
That is why I try to leave scope for a reply in the form of a question or likewise, ie whenever possible. Helps connecting with the author, if they reply back, else try again in another post.
I believe all bloggers would love to have an interactive comment section. Would you agree?
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Well, can’t say for all….besides being bloggers, we are all different people after all. But yes, I love interacting with fellow bloggers. And so do you I guess.
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“Nice post” doesn’t leave much for the author to work upon, does it? Adding a little more to it does spark up a conversation. Perhaps a question or something like that. Though it’s my opinion.
And doesn’t it make each person unique and interesting?
Yes, I do. I am in the middle of that process right now. 😁
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Yes, of course dear Enigma 😝. A writer’s mind is always curious. What really excites me is to know and understand how different readers can interpret the same poem in different ways. I am always eager to know what really made them hit the like button or leave a comment. Yes, so a little more than “nice post” always brings about a greater thrill….to me at least. 😁
And yes, we are all unique and interesting in our own ways….and that’s a wonderful thing. 😊
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I know right! I have the same exact thoughts. I too want to know what they liked in the post, and more importantly what they hated, which helps me in improving myself. 😁
Sometimes, it pains me to see people hitting the like button just because it’s in their feed and that they have followed the blog, without actually reading it.
Yes, it indeed is a wonderful thing. 😊
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Great ! 😀
Since you didn’t put across any question in your last comment, I am assuming that you are either sleepy or busy writing something….and I don’t wish to disturb you in either of the situations.
It was lovely connecting with you. Hope to have more interactions soon.
Good night (not sure if it’s night in ur part of the world,but still)
Bye !
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I love the voice of the poem!
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Thanks very much Laura ! I am thrilled to know you enjoyed it. 😀
You write beautifully and I really wish to read more from you soon. 😊
Much love !
Chhaya
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Your are the first person I followed after joining this site, I could relate to your poem i.e., malencoly and yet optimistic in the same way, hope to be able to write like you one day ☺️
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Thanks so much dear for the read and the lovely comment. I am glad that you liked it. It’s humbling to know that I was the first you followed. 😀
You write really well and I am excited about reading more from you. You have a unique style and hence it would be unfair if you compare yourself with any other writer. You are doing excellent ! Keep writing and happy blogging my dear friend (I wish I knew your name ! )
Much love !
Chhaya
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Love it
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Thanks so much ! 😊
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Excellent poem. I love when people write from their heart and soul. I can feel it. Great work. BTW thanks for following my blog as well. I do appreciate it and hope you enjoy it!
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Thank you so much for taking out time to visit my blog and for the like and the lovely comment. I am thrilled to know that you liked my work ! 😀
I really enjoyed your writings and would love to read more from you. You have got a fantastic blog and I am going to visit it quite often. 😊
Cheers !
Chhaya
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Thank you Chhaya. I’m glad you enjoyed my blog. I look forward to reading your poetry often as well. Have a great week!
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Hi Chhaya,
Beautifully written and fully relatable! I am new to wordpress and enjoy reading poetry. Loving your truthful writing! Best wishes for the future! 🙂
Regards,
Tiya xxx
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Heyyy Tiya….so good to hear from you and thanks so much for the read and your generous words of appreciation. I am so glad you enjoyed reading my work. 😊
Your first poetry on this forum is just beautiful. You are such a blessed writer and I am excited about you. I really look forward to reading more of your poetry. Just keep writing…you are doing well !
My very best to you for everything, Tiya !
Much love !
Chhaya
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Such a wondefully written poem. Makes me happy and sad at the same time!
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Thanks Tushita ! I am glad you liked it. 😘😘
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A beautiful truth that is loud and so honest in your heart. 🙂
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Thanks so much Charlie ! Lovely to hear from. I am glad you enjoyed this piece. 😊
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Thank you so much💕….for your comment… definitely will continue to work on☺️
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lovely
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Thanks Joseph. Lovely to hear from you. 😊
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Incredibly moving! Loved reading your poem.
In fact, you inspired me to write a poem of my own. I’d love any feedback.
https://hazelvaranocom.wordpress.com/2017/06/08/broken-record/
Hazel
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Hey Hazel ! It’s lovely to have you here. Thank you for taking time out of your day to visit my blog and read my poems. Your lovely comment made me grin a little more wider ! 😀
You are a blessed writer and I loved this creation which you shared with me. It’s a wonderful feeling to know that your work could inspire somebody to create something further. I am humbled by your kind words.
Your writings are beautiful Hazel and I look forward to reading more from you. 😊
Much love,
Chhaya
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Such a beautiful and inspiring poem! 😊
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Thanks a lot Bianca ! Your kind comment means a lot to me. You are a brilliant writer and I look forward to reading more from you. 😊
Much love !!
Chhaya
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Aww thank you so much! 🙂
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Amazing. Good read!
http://sagarikajhamb.wordpress.com
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Thanks so much Sagarika ! I am glad you enjoyed the read. 😊
Much love !
Chhaya
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Do check out posts on my blog 🙂
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I just stumbled upon your blog, looking for fresh poetry. Your poems are so raw and engaging, and I enjoy reading them because it makes me look deeper into myself, parts of myself that I do not usually pay attention to. I want to just a thanks for sharing your talents, and I hope you continue to writing some more!
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Thanks so much my dear friend (I wish I knew your name) and apologies for late response from my end ! I am so glad you took out time from your day to visit my blog and read my poems. I am deeply overwhelmed by your kind words. You are extremely generous and encouraging. Very happy to connect with you. Hope you would keep visiting my little world of poetry. 😊
You have got a lovely blog. My very best to you for everything !
Cheers !! 😀
Chhaya
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