I can’t believe
you are right there
excavating
all the unexplored
territories of me
and unveiling
my darkest insecurities
which I had buried
deep inside
the most guarded corners
of my core
displaying
an utmost level of proficiency
in carefully hiding
all the midden of my life
an accumulation of nothing
but skeletons of my past
you can now almost see them
or at least feel their sure presence
as their impressions become clear
even through the layers of filth
which continue to envelope them
and soon your hands will be there
doing away all the laminas
to surface things to light
and that’s when you would realise
how facade was the frame
which glowed in glory
camouflaging all the mayhem
which was breeding inside.
-Chhaya
This is such a breathtaking poem, it is so deep and beautiful. Thank you for sharing!
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Thanks so much Karissa for the read and your kind comment ! I am thrilled to know that you enjoyed it. 😊
Much love !!
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You are so talented!
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Thanks so much Adrienne ! It’s very kind of you to think so. 😊
Much love,
Chhaya
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which glowed in glory
camouflaging all the mayhem
which was breeding inside.
Wow! Loved it, Chhaya! Wonderful!
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So good to hear from you Sakshi. Thanks very much for the read and the lovely comment ! I am all smiles. 😊😊
Much love !!
💓💓💓
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You’re welcome dear! And I am glad I made you smile.😊
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💝💝
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Wonderful…heartfelt…poignant…
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Thanks so much Sangbad ! Lovely to hear from you. I am glad you enjoyed this ! 😊
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Welcome Chaya…😀
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“an accumulation of nothing but skeletons of my past ” that’s too deep.
That’s a lovely poem
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Thanks so much Suraj ! I am so glad you liked it ! 😊
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Deep and thoughtful.
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Thanks so much Devika for the read and the kind comment ! I am thrilled that you like it. So glad to hear from you. 😊
Much love !
💓💓💓
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Pleasure is all mine.:)
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😊😘
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Aww.Have a great evening ahead.:)
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You too Devika ! 😊
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Beautiful. The poet bares herself vulnerable and yet she seems so strong. Loved it!
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Thanks a lot Tushita ! I am all smiles. 😊😊
Love !
💓😘😘💓
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Fantastic write as usual.deep
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Thanks so much Mark ! I am glad you liked it. I feel bad that I am not able to make time to maintain the regularity in my posts and follow my favourite bloggers, which also includes you. I will read your posts soon. Take care !
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That’s OK it’s just as the numbers in crease it gets harder to read everyone’s work
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I love how ambiguous the poem is, the narrator could be either a lover or maybe a therapist. It reads so beautifully too!
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Dear Laura, thanks so much for taking out time of your day to read my poem and for the kind comment. I am thrilled to know that you enjoyed it. Interesting guess about the narrator there. 😁
You write beautifully Laura and I really look forward to reading more from you. Happy writing ! 😊
Much love !
Chhaya
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Wonderful
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Thanks so much Darren ! Lovely to hear from you after a long time. Hope you have been well. 😊
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Keep doing this 🙂 amazing piece of poetry.
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Hey Elsa, lovely to hear from you ! Thanks for the read and the kind comment. I am glad you enjoyed it. Hope you’ve been well. Take care !
Much love !!
Chhaya
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You’re welcome, Chhaya. Nice to hear from you after a while!
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Pleasure to connect with you Elsa ! 😊
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Spellbinding!!!
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Thanks so much for the read and the comment Abhishek ! Glad that you liked it. 😁
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A amazing poem dear Poet. To open closed door and to know love caress. Our miracles, we need to know.
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Thanks so much John for the read and the kind comment, and of course for the reblog too ! I am so glad you liked my work. Love can be the most intimidating, yet one of the most fulfilling experiences of life, is what I believe. 😊
Have a wonderful weekend John !
Cheers !! 😀
Chhaya
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You are right dear Poet. Without knowing love. What would we be?
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So true, John ! 😊
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Reblogged this on johncoyote and commented:
Please read and enjoy the work of a talented writer.
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👍👍👌 beautiful..
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Thanks so much Ankan ! 😊
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Yr welcome…☺☺😊
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😀
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Deep and profound. Well written. 🙂
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Thank you very much ! I am all smiles. 😊😊
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You’re welcome. 😊
Well, it was easy to make you smile. You just have to write a new post. 😅
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Hehe…yeah, hopefully soon ! 😊
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your words glow xo
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I am all smiles, Joseph ! Thanks so much.😊😊
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I relate a lot to this:
unexplored
territories of me
and unveiling
my darkest insecurities
which I had buried
deep inside
the most guarded corners
of my core
I feel this because I’m very extremely careful on how I express my feelings to the world.
That is why my poetry is riddled in code & messages.
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Thanks so much Charlie ! And I can completely understand what you are saying. 😊
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Beautiful poem
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Thanks so much Avdhesh ! I am glad you liked it. 😊
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Welcome dear
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