I often call out your name
in the moments of extreme solitude
when the only thing I hear
is the sound of my own breath
and the tick tock of the clock
as the seconds merge with the minutes
and the minutes merge with the hours
but they never seem to have
enough of each other
for they keep going round and round
with an unfathomable desire
to unite again and again
I often call out your name
when a thin crescent moon
tries to slip into my room
through the slit of the window pane
to brighten up the ambience
just enough to make it possible
to barely perceive the presence
of objects in the darkness
I so vividly remember,
that’s as much light you prefer
when we make love, right ?
I often call out your name
when all the possibilities
of reaching out to you seem bleak
as distances transform into walls
obstructing all of my senses
which were only meant to feel you
and slowly in dire despair
senses turn impervious to stimuli
making me feel like I am nothing more
but just a clutter of vestigial organs
Yes, I often call out your name
when I am all alone.
-Chhaya
Wow. This is amazing. 💖
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Thanks very much Sarah ! I am so glad you enjoyed it ! 😊
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I did, very much.
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Smiles 😊😊
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So happy to see here Sarah. It has been a long while.
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It has. I’m not sure what’s going on with wp.
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Yeah. I don’t know either. I feel like something is off with the site.
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Maybe, it’s been off for many people.
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May I add it to my next poetry newsletter?
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Oh of course Sarah ! It would be an absolute honour. Thanks so much for considering this piece worth adding to your newsletter ! I am thrilled ! 😊
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You’re welcome! It definitely deserves a spot!
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Thanks for being so encouraging Sarah ! I am truly humbled ! 😊
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You’re welcome!
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😊
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Wow a melancholic piece…good one Chaya…and congrats on the newsletter…
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Hey Sangbad ! Thanks so much for the kind comment and for always being so very encouraging ! 😊
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I had to read this multiple times, only because I wish there was more. What a fantastic job. I look forward to reading your work so much! Thanks for sharing!!
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This truly means a lot to me and I feel thrilled and humbled at the same time ! Thanks so much…..I really appreciate you taking out time to read my poems ! 😊
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So haunting beautiful 💖
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Dear Yassy….so glad that you enjoyed reading it ! I very much appreciate your comment and truly value each of your encouraging gestures. Much love !! 😘😘
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It’s solitude which teaches us the importance of the person whom we love the most.
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That’s so true Kiran. Thanks so much for the read and your kind comment ! 😊
Much love !!
💓💓💓
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Love you too dear Sister Chaaya 😊
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❤ ❤
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This is amazing ♥♥♥
“I often call out your name
when all the possibilities
of reaching out to you seem bleak
as distances transform into walls
obstructing all of my senses
which were only meant to feel you
and slowly in dire despair
senses turn impervious to stimuli
making me feel like I am nothing more
but just a clutter of vestigial organs…”
Such pious love. Seldom seen today but I love this love!
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Thanks so much Tushita ! I am all smiles 😊😊
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another great piece from the heart these are so well crafted your style Is unique
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Thanks so much Mark ! It’s always a delight to have your comment on my post. 😊
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You poor soul.
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Well…not so poor as you are assuming it to be. It’s just a poem. 😀
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I’m feeling for the speaker of the poem.
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I’m feeling for the speaker of the poem. Lol. Well done here.
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Lol ! I understand. 😁
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Chaaya this is beautiful.
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Thanks so much Manal ! I am glad you enjoyed it ! 😊
Much love !!
💓💓💓
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I nominated you for an award in my latest post. Forgive me I couldn’t tag you I’m still new to this. Tagging part is new to me.
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Hey Manal….I will certainly check it out. And thanks so much for the nomination ! 😊
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Sure 😊 my pleasure chaaya
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❤
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purely captivating
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Thank you so much for taking time out of your day to read my poem and for your kind words of praise ! I am glad you liked it !! 😊
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Just speechless! The first stanza is beyond imagination.
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Hey Sampriti….so glad you enjoyed it ! Thanks so much for your generous words of compliment ! I am all smiles 😊😊
Much love !!
💓💓💓
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💝💝
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Such a lovely one. I could feel the verses in and out as I read. If there is some one these words are written for, I wish to let him know how fortunate he is and if there is no one, I wish to tell you that you are amazingly talented. 💙
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Hahaha….I loved your comment….so overwhelming and a little witty ! Thanks so much for your generous words of compliment. I am so glad you enjoyed the read. And yes, this is one comment I am certainly going to share with him ! 😁
Cheers and best wishes !!
Chhaya
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Haha…😁😆 I really love your poems for their depiction of intense love, which is little different from what I have assume it to be. Lots of love to you and him! 💙🐼
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assumed*
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Thank you so much….this means a lot to me ! I hope you keep enjoying my poems further too. Your lovely comment just made my heart sing !! 💓 😊💓
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So so very beautiful, Chhaya!
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Thank you so so very much Vidur !! 😁
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Haha….I wish you wouldn’t thank each time Chhaya…reading your writing is treat enough 😀
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Well…a good feeling must be expressed and shared. So please let me thank. 😁
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Amazing and so beautifully put…love it.
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Well i m getting short of adjectives here…☺☺☺
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I can’t believe it…you are certainly lying 😝
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It’s true…I m certainly not lying…☺☺
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Hehe…😊
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lovely xo
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Thanks very much Joseph and good to hear from you after long ! I am so glad you liked it.😊
Hope you have been well.
Cheers !!
Chhaya
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It’s beautiful piece of writing !!
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Thanks so much, Raj ! Glad that you liked it. 😊
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