How much would it take
for you to interpret
what lies behind
my forced smiles
and the guise of
deep watery eyes
can’t you see
I am only trying to be
how you wanted me to be
wrapping my hopes
under the covers of
fake contentment
squeezing myself
to perfectly fit into
the exact frame of
your expectations
and sometimes
I fold myself
like a piece of
silken clothing
to find some space
in your packed closet
hoping that someday
you might pick me up
and take time
to unfold my layers
observing the intricacies
of minute patterns
carefully woven
on a tedious craft
and then perhaps
you just might spot
the missing strands
and little knots of threads
giving jitters to your hands
as you run your fingers
on the plain fabric
feeling the coarseness
mild but sharp enough
to pierce into your skin
giving you a sense of reality.
-Chhaya
Oh my this is good anxiety caused through trying to be what everyone wants you to be not your self
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Thanks Mark ! Yes, this is what the poem intended to convey. I am glad you liked it 😊
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I suppose this poem speaks mostly about how young people would cope and try to fit in and be accepted. ..
beautifully written Chhaya..
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Thanks so much Mich ! So glad you liked it. Your interpretation is very close indeed 😊
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Brilliant
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Thanks so much 😊
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So very beautiful.
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Thank you so much ! Your kind comment means a lot 😊
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wow ! wow ! nice thoughts…its really true…sometimes you really are like a fabric…great thinking chhaya…wonderful!
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Thanks so much Jas ! Great to know that you liked it 😊
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Wow!! That was intense ❤❤
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Thanks so much dear Tanushree ! Lovely to have your comment ! 😊
Much love 💕💕💕
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It’s lovely
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Thanks a lot Ritu Raj ! 😊
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You are most welcome Chhaya!
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😊
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🙋🙏👍👌👊👏
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Hahaha….very creative Sangbad !! Does it mean that you liked the poem ? 😛
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😎 absolutely…ye bhi koi puchne ki baat hai…bura lagega only Like no Comment…
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Hahahaha….arreyyy nahi lagega bura. Haan par comment aayega to khushi thodi aur badh jayega 😝
Aapke like aur tippani dono ke liye bahut bahut shukriya !! 😁
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😄😃 now your turn…my morn postm…😀
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Yes yes…just give me a little time.
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👍
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This has a strong message..loved the way you play around with words..u have a different style and I have begun to really love your work ❤
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Thrilled to know that Tushita ! Thanks so much 😘😘
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So beautifully woven feelings ….like a soft and silky fabric ….I always have space for it in my life 😊
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Haha….that’s very sweet of you Kiran ! Thanks a lot 😊
Much love 💕💕
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Beautiful..👌👌👌
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Thanks so much Ankan 😊
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My pleasure… ☺☺☺
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Loved this poem and the deeper meaning to it! Really good stuff, flowed well too. You’ve got my follow. Check out my comedy blog and give it a follow if you like it!
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Thanks so much for sparing time to read my poem and for the follow. I am so glad you liked it. Will certainly check out your blog 😊
Cheers !!
Chhaya
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No problem!! 😄👍🏼
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No problem, awesome!
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Beautiful! Loved it 😀
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Thanks so much Edwin ! Very glad to know you liked it 😊
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Welcome. Always a pleasure. 🙂
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Beautiful, Chhaya! Loved the analogy of the knots in the weave 🙂
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Thanks so much Vidur ! You have always been so encouraging 😊
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Your poem resonates. You write well, Chhaya.
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Thanks so much Audrey ! Lovely to hear from you. Hope life is good. Much love and peace 😊💕💕
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It was brilliant, Chhaya. Well done. 💕
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Thanks so much Sakshi ! I am all smiles 😊😊
Much love !!
💕💕💕💕
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Pleasure, dear!!
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I lived a life like this one, once. Beautiful work. ❤
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Kindra, I am glad you are out of that phase now. Thanks so much for the read and for taking time to leave a comment 😊
Much love and peace to you !
💕💕💕💕
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💞💞💞 Peace to you, lovely lady.
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The verse about trying to fit the expectations and perception of others, brilliant!!! Great job Chhaya!
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Thanks so much pal and excuse me for this delayed reply ! I am glad you enjoyed reading this piece. Hope life is all good. Cheers !! 😁
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Wow…i am new to this world… beautifully wrote…super.
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Thanks a ton and welcome to blogging ! Happy writing to you 😊
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Well written. I like the way you related things with an everyday common object. Will be looking forward to read more…
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Thank you so much for your kind words. I am glad you liked it 😊😊
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Checkout my blog and it would be nice if you share your views and suggestions as I am new here.
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Sure, I would 😊
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Taaliyan, taaliyan, taaliyan! Take a bow, girl!
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Haha…thanks so much Kunal ! I am all smiles and very humbled by your words of praise !! 😊😊
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the pain in heart by whom we love is more and more sharp in words
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True !!
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