Little twisted
little broken
little bruised
that we are
so they find us
little crazy
little misfit
to this world
but that’s ok
for we know that
we don’t care
how they really feel
since what matters
is just that
we are happy
in our skins
they don’t know this
that it’s a blessing
we are together
despite all odds
and that shattered
we might be
but our spirits
are not yet low
and moreover
all my pieces
perfectly fit
into your holes
and every crack that
I have been hiding
you seep deep
into them all
and that’s how
we are complete
in this world which
thinks we are half
for you make me
and I make you
whole in every
way that we are.
-Chhaya
I like this it is very simple but very ying and yang one may not exist without the other
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Haha…thanks so much Mark. I like the reference to ying and yang…yes it’s like that. I am glad you liked it 😊
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This is so beautiful.
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Thank you so much ! I am delighted to know that you liked it. Much love 😊
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Such a perfect , complete poem. Simple and beautiful.
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Thanks so much dear Yassy ! I truly appreciate your comment. So glad that you liked it ! 😊
Much love ❤ ❤
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You are welcome dear ! Have a nice weekend, Chhaya. ❤😘
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Thanks Yassy…and you too 😊
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Simple things told in simple manner impact more…
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Thanks so much Sangbad ! Why complicate things when simplicity works as fine…lol ! Jokes apart…thanks for your kind words. I am glad you enjoyed it 😁
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not to mention…I tried a complicated one last morn and this morn a simple one…
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Will read Sangbad 😊
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Okay…there was a special post I posted yesterday…check when you got a time…
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Sure ! Give me the title…which one ?
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Nice poem!
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Thank you so much 😊
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I love how complex something so simply said can be!! Cheers on this great work!!!
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Thank you so much ! I am all smiles 😊
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Simple words with very deep meaning and I think this is a poem that many people will relate to..whose love is not understood by common people.
Simply loved it ❤
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Thank you so much Tushita ! I am so glad you liked it ❤ ❤
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Bloody brilliant piece! I love it so simple and beautiful
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Thanks so much Roy ! Delighted to have your lovely comment 😊
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Welcome!
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This was a sweet one describing the ones own little universe of love.. 🙂
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Thanks Prakash ! I am so glad you liked it 😊
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I love this Chhaya..simple verses……with really strong message
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Thanks so much Mich ! I am all smiles 😊😊
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Such beautiful words…it feels good to read ur pieces…thanks chhaya for sharing… 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Thanks so much Ankan ! Always a pleasure to hear from you and to have words of encouragement 😊
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My pleasure… 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Thanks so much for finding the poem worth linking ! 😊
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That’s very strong feeling love expressed in simple words …I have never gone through this …but I strongly feel
If those two are are prefect for each other they need not care what the world thinks about them that’s a feeling of trust for each other
A very strong bond of love expressed beautifully in the last two stanzas
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Thanks so much Kiran for the read and the lovely comment ! I am all smiles 😊 😊
Much love !!
Chhaya
❤ ❤
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Smiles here too😊…bravo !!
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Your coffer is beyond worth sis chayya 😊
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Haha…thanks Kiran…that means a lot sweetheart. Please keep visiting. And yes, keep writing too. I look forward to reading your posts.
Love !! ❤ ❤
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Sure dear sister Chayya 😊 ..you are most welcome to my world of thoughts and feelings …feelings of love here too
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You’ve provided a balance of both ‘ying & yang’ the expressionism in your words define the meaning of all things that perfection and a triumph. 🙂
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Hey Charlie….such a delight to hear from you and thanks for your generous words of praise ! I am so glad that you liked it. You have been very encouraging 😊
Cheers !!
Chhaya
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Never stop writing. Always pour out every experience, & emotion that you see. Your voice and your work become the light of we humanity needs.
You make the world a better place. 🙂
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You are very kind and generous Charlie. Thanks for being so encouraging ! I am touched and humbled by your kind words. I am immensely impressed by your writings and hope to take more inspiration from you in thevdays to follow. Thanks for being there and joining me in thus poetry journey. Love and peace to you !! 😊
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Inspiration is what fuels the heart and talents of all poets. Bless you my friend…let the poetic journey begin. 🙂
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So blissful…. 🙂
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Thanks so much Vidur 😊
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