Our unruffled unscathed present
enveloped by the shadows of dark past
was not meant to be like a raven room
full of dead memories and creepy dreams
we the detached deserted souls
like broken branches of trees
lying on the ground in blistering heat
were not meant to sear ourselves
with the caustic pain that we have imbibed
the slivered and shredded hearts
ravaged by the thrashes of doomed love
were not meant to be mended
with the guilt of undevised sins that we hold
the smiles that we barely give away
on our incidental awkward meetings
were not meant to be restricted
by the extent of closeness which we share
the loving tender touch of warm fingers
which we have been abstaining from
were not meant to remind us of
all the ugly scars that our bodies carry
the windows and doors of desires
which we have kept shut over the years
were not meant to keep at bay
the beams of luminous hope
which the future would soon radiate.
-Chhaya
Deep.very deep a lot trying to get out there as well
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Thanks for the read and your kind comment Mark 🙂
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Thoughtful…intriguing…left me ponder for few moments…
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Hey Sangbad…thanks so much for the read and your kind words ! I am glad you liked it 🙂
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Not to mention…it’s my pleasure to read your poem…
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That’s very kind of you Sangbad ! 🙂
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☺
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Deeply beautiful.
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Thanks so much ! I am glad you liked it 🙂
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That was superb and thought provoking Chaya!
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Dear Vandana, I am so glad you liked it ! Thanks so much for the read and your kind words 🙂
Much love ❤
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You are welcome dear 🙂
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❤ ❤
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This is indeed quite thought provoking. And I had to read 2-3 times to really get the essence of the poem. Wonderfully written ❤
It seemed to me that the protagonist of the poem hopes to have the love back but another part of her doesn't want it back. She doesn't regret anything but maybe she is guilty of fantasising about her love that she once had or maybe there is a possibility that she may get that back what she wishes for! I may have gotten it completely wrong but I am enjoying this process of really understanding and discussing your poems because they all are very interesting and has a story to tell ❤ ❤ ❤
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Dear Tushita, thanks so much for this lovely comment ! I am glad that you put in so much time to read my poem and to understand its real essence. Your interpretation is quite close I must say, but I would be happy to discuss more on it 🙂
Thanks again ! ❤ ❤
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and have* a story to tell (sorry typo)
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Beautiful… this piece has a great rhythmic nature…carry on the good works chhaya…☺☺👍👍👌
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Thanks Ankan ! Happy that you liked it 🙂
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Doomed love were not to be mended…doors of desires were not meant to keep at bay..there is a hope. wonderful chhaya. Last para is my favourite…this poem reminded me of generous stranger.👌
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My dear Jeni….thank you so much for the read and the lovely comment ! I am glad you enjoyed it 🙂
Much love ❤ ❤
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This is just wow! Amazed at how deep you have managed to reach beneath the layers where we hide the unexpressed reality from what it we make it seem.
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* from what we make it seem.
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Thanks so much for your kind words Vidur. This means a lot to me. I just tried to put my feelings into words as best as I could. I am extremely delighted to know that you liked it 🙂
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Thoroughly enjoyed it, Chhaya!
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Glad to know that Vidur 🙂
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We have awful pasts… We’ve foud true love in each other…. We plan to play by the “rule” now…. only that the past is challenging that….
That’s my humble deduction. I might be wrong though. Great job anyway. And those double adjectives work just fine…….
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You are very close to the exact interpretation my friend ! That’s the beauty about poetry….we all see them through our own distinct lenses. Thanks so much for taking time to read it and for your lovely comment. I am so glad that you liked it 🙂
Cheers !!
Chhaya
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Very nice, every words lingers on my delicate heart so as I was left here thinking about the moments I never expected that would happen. Sad moments to be exact.
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Yours poems are always intriguing…This one is no less
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Thank you so much Aunty ! I am glad you took out time to read it and comment 🙂
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Chaya, take a bow, you’re on a roll!
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Haha…Kunal…thanks so much ! No doubt you are too generous with your words of praises, but I am extremely glad to receive them from you. Thrilled that you liked my work ! 🙂
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Sure, I do! Cheers!
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Cheers !! 🙂
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