Two trembling hands
scribing ardently
on old pale crispy papers
trying to overwrite
the already written
in their attempt
to redo the story
which had already met
its fate long back
a little change here
a silly twist there
reshuffling the sequence
undoing few events
some emotions left unexpressed
some reactions left undisplayed
some words deleted
some acts excluded
bringing a smile here
adding a kiss there
changing the frown into a grin
replacing the gloom with a glim
those blues made to be fun
those fights entirely shunned
adding more stars to the nights
bringing more hues to the lights
but as the story would unfold
and the dreary end would unroll
the trembling hands
would soon realise
that their attempts were
unavailing and futile
that no matter how hard
they would have tried
there were things destined
they could never have defied
for the twists and the garbles
and all the little bends
can only tweak the story
but not alter its end.
-Chhaya
Beautiful… a fantastic piece!
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Thanks so much ! I am glad you liked it 🙂
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I smiled reading this poem. Because it reminded of the saying, something I try to remind myself- no matter how hard we try, Some things are just not meant to be.
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Such a lovely comment Ameena ! Thanks so much. I love the way you always encourage me.
Much love ❤
Chhaya
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the pleasure’s mine 😊
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❤ ❤ ❤ I do love reading your poetry, dear Lady.
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John, this means a lot ! Thanks so much 🙂
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lovely you write deep poetry
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Great work speaks on so many levels
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Thanks so much Mark ! I am glad you liked my work. Please do keep visiting my little world. Your blog looks very interesting and I look forward to reading more from you.
Cheers !!
Chhaya 🙂
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Thank you I will be writing and publishing another two today I am going to sit in the park and draft one while my daughter plays
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Haha….that’s really sweet Mark. How old is your daughter ?
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She is 10
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My love to her ! Happy writing Mark 🙂
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Thank you and happy writing to you as well
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Thanks 🙂
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Loved it
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Thanks so much Elsa 🙂
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Wow!its beautiful,the theme too.
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Thanks so much for the read and your kind words. I am glad you liked it 🙂
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My pleasure:)
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all the little bends
can only tweak the story
but not alter its end.
👆
Beautifully said.❤
Lovely phrases chhaya!
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Thanks so much Akshay ! I am glad you enjoyed it 🙂
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Ohh ofcourse, I did !!✌
Keep posting!!
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🙂
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Some things are not really meant to be..beautiful..
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Thanks so much Mich ! I am so glad you liked it 🙂
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Wow! Lovely lines ❤
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Thanks so much 🙂 ❤ ❤
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lovely 🙂
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Thanks so much dear Korede 🙂 ❤
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Everything finally remains under the sun and the moon. Nice poem. Reminds me of the movie time machine. Destiny finally remains the same. 🙂
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Thanks so much Prakash ! I loved the movie “The Time Traveler’s Wife”…have you seen it ? Anyway, the poem wasn’t inspired by it. There’s one poem titled “Time Machine” which I wrote some days back. Not sure if you have read it. 🙂
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Welcome.. 🙂
I haven’t seen “The Tim… Wife” yet. Will check out.. 🙂 There is more than one version of movie ‘Time Machine’. I like the older one the most.
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I don’t think I have watched “Time Machine”. Not much into movies really.
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oh, okay. He tries to save his love by building a time machine and traveling to various era. But in every story/era, she dies.
The plot of the movie somewhat resembles to your poem. I hope you get that logic by now.. 😀
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Got it !! 🙂
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🙂 🙂
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Wonderful lines.. 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Thanks so much Ankan ! Hope you are well 🙂
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Yeah I m fine how r u??
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I am also fine Ankan. Thanks for asking 🙂
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Btw where r u from??
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Well, I am from Dehradun…but have been working in Rajasthan….born and brought up in Arunachal ! You ?
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I am from Kolkata…but working in Mumbai.. 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Cool !! 🙂
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☺☺☺
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Beautiful… reminded me of the following lines from Ghalib
हुई मुद्दत कि ग़ालिब मर गया पर याद आता है
वो हर एक बात पर कहना कि यों होता तो क्या होता
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Uff….kya baat keh di aapne !! Shukriya 🙂
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Inspirational….
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Thanks so much 🙂
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Lovely as usual
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Thank you very much 🙂
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Aww..chhaya this one is so cute and painful at the same time. You can try altering the story but it remains unaltered. I believe in destiny. It’s such a pleasure to read this poem of yours.
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Thanks so much dear Jeni for your kind words. It’s always a pleasure to hear from you. Much love ❤ 🙂
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Same here😊😊
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❤
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This is beautiful.
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Thanks so much ! I am glad you liked it 🙂 Would you mind telling me your name ?
Much love,
Chhaya ❤
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Yeah. My name is Manal 😊
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It’s a beautiful name Manal ! Happy to connect with you 🙂
Love,
Chhaya ❤
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That’s really sweet of you 😊 thank you.
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My pleasure Manal 🙂 ❤
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😊😊
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I felt this this the other day, was rearranging and tweaking on one of my pieces from a month ago, finally got it the way I want.
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Dear Myra, thanks for reading my poem and for sharing your personal experience. I am glad you could finally get your piece the way you wanted it to be.
Much love,
Chhaya ❤
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