If you would have embodied
a fraction of me
and I would have imbibed
a portion of you
we could have filled up the voids in each other
and then our love would have been whole
If you would have caressed
some of my cracks
and I would have eased
some of your sores
we could have healed all of our wounds
and then our love would have been painless
If you would have tried
a little bit more
and I would have strived
a little bit harder
we could have calmed the storms inside us
and then our love would have been benign
If you would have kissed me
a little longer
and I would have embraced you
a little tighter
we could have endured the assaults of time
and then our love would have been eternal
If you would have given up
some “I” from yourself
and I would have given up
some “me” from myself
we could have created a world of “us”
and then our love would have been divine.
-Chhaya
Damn bloody good, Chhaya!
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Thanks so much Kunal….means a lot to me, especially to have this come from a fantastic writer like you ! 🙂
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…thank you, I mean every word of what I commented
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Thanks…I am humbled 🙂
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Wonderful
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Thank you 🙂
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Getting late, are you heading home?
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Heyyy…yes…I was traveling the whole night. It’s an overnight journey from my parents’ place to the place where I stay and the phone network was pathetic all through the journey. I saw your posts but couldn’t take time to go through them Darren. I am going to read them today for sure 🙂
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Beautiful…
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Thanks so much Ankan ! Your poetry is amazing…so deep and so honest. I just now read a few, and look forward to reading more. Hope you would keep sparing time to read my poems. Do keep visiting.
My very best to you !
Chhaya 🙂
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Thank you… And of course I would read your poems…:)
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Thanks so much Ankan 🙂
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great post !!
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Thanks so much Tanushree for stopping by my blog and for the likes and the follow ! You write beautifully, I just went through some of your posts. I look forward to reading more of your creations.
Do keep visiting and reading my poems. It’s a pleasure to connect eith you.
My very best for all your endevours !
Love,
Chhaya 🙂
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Thank you so much chhaya for follow and such a sweet message..
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My pleasure Tanushree. Do keep in touch 🙂
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Wow…this is like a song! So beautiful ❤
This is gold-
If you would have kissed me
a little longer
and I would have embraced you
a little tighter
we could have endured the assaults of time
and then our love would have been eternal
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Thanks Tushita….I somehow already had this feeling that you would love those lines 🙂
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Aww..brilliant composition.loved it.💓
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Thanks so much Jeni for stopping by my blog and for taking time to read my poems. It’s wonderful to have your lovely comment. Your blog is amazing and I look forward to reading more from you.
Please do keep visiting…it’s a pleasure to connect with you.
My very best for all your endevours !
Love,
Chhaya 🙂
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*long, long sigh* beautifully, simply perfect…
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Heyy Joseph…so glad that you liked it ! Thanks so much for reading 🙂
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You are very welcome, Chhaya! 🙂
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🙂
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The most difficult thing I come across everytime is the ‘topic’ to write on and you just presented IF with so much beauty. hats off
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You are very kind and generous to say so Jitin. Thanks very much ! 😊
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